for He did WHAT?2/5/2017 c1 
1Penny
Enjoyed it. Nice additions to the story. I think you did a good job with Aral's voice.
1PennyEnjoyed it. Nice additions to the story. I think you did a good job with Aral's voice.
9/4/2014 c1 pegeen
Having just reread the story of Ivan and Tej I thoroughly enjoyed this piece which is a perfect imagining of Aral and Cordelia's reactions. But what about the gargoyles?
Having just reread the story of Ivan and Tej I thoroughly enjoyed this piece which is a perfect imagining of Aral and Cordelia's reactions. But what about the gargoyles?
5/19/2013 c1 5PiperX
"Incidentally, those gargoyles are not just for decoration"
I lolled at this bit and didn't really stop laughing til the end. Good stuff! Well done
5PiperX"Incidentally, those gargoyles are not just for decoration"
I lolled at this bit and didn't really stop laughing til the end. Good stuff! Well done
4/11/2013 c1 TartKiwiFruit
bahahaha, I love how he's always referred to as "that idiot Ivan." Great reactions from Aral. X3
bahahaha, I love how he's always referred to as "that idiot Ivan." Great reactions from Aral. X3
12/23/2012 c1 78wanderingsmith
LMAO! I also loved the scene of ImpSec slowly lowering into the ground :D.
hadn't even thought of how Aral would respond to it though! well done!
surprised he didn't react to Gregor grumbling about Simon's involvement, though
78wanderingsmithLMAO! I also loved the scene of ImpSec slowly lowering into the ground :D.
hadn't even thought of how Aral would respond to it though! well done!
surprised he didn't react to Gregor grumbling about Simon's involvement, though
12/21/2012 c1 6EditorIncredulous
"What has Miles done this time?" - Classic. Just CLASSIC. Given the shenanigans Miles gets into... sinking ImpSec would not be beyond his scope of capability. No wonder Cordelia jumped to conclusions!
And now you have me wondering just what the gargoyles were for... not just decoration? What sorts of booby traps was ImpSec set up with...?
Good job, very funny, and thanks for this nice little piece!
6EditorIncredulous"What has Miles done this time?" - Classic. Just CLASSIC. Given the shenanigans Miles gets into... sinking ImpSec would not be beyond his scope of capability. No wonder Cordelia jumped to conclusions!
And now you have me wondering just what the gargoyles were for... not just decoration? What sorts of booby traps was ImpSec set up with...?
Good job, very funny, and thanks for this nice little piece!
12/16/2012 c1 joniskpelare
Very nice. Love their reactions to everything.
Very nice. Love their reactions to everything.