for Shinobi's Creed3/22 c51 Guest
Might I recommend getting a Discord page and finding a few beta's to help with writing and also it will keep us updated.
P.S. If your wondering why I made two of these it's because I don't if you would have seen this one or the other one.
UlforceGreymon
Might I recommend getting a Discord page and finding a few beta's to help with writing and also it will keep us updated.
P.S. If your wondering why I made two of these it's because I don't if you would have seen this one or the other one.
UlforceGreymon
3/14 c51 
18Dragon and Sword Master
It is great to see you finally back in the saddle and glad to see that you aren't dead just yet.
Concerning the chapter, I enjoyed every part of it. The tea ceremony with Anko, the assassin meeting and Naruto showing off his new invention (I have not heard many good things about Unity so I doubt I'm missing much) and finally everything concerning Fuu.
Great chapter and cannot wait to see more!
18Dragon and Sword MasterIt is great to see you finally back in the saddle and glad to see that you aren't dead just yet.
Concerning the chapter, I enjoyed every part of it. The tea ceremony with Anko, the assassin meeting and Naruto showing off his new invention (I have not heard many good things about Unity so I doubt I'm missing much) and finally everything concerning Fuu.
Great chapter and cannot wait to see more!
2/22 c51 1AyanoZonurai
For accidentally finding this fic looking up “ ac Desmond reborn in Naruto world” I am absolutely in love. I love the way you portray Naruto, Hinata, Anko, and even Kurenai. They aren’t completely OC , they actually still fit the original characteristics ,etc., and the story portrays their growth and development into who the are now. I think Naruto could say “Believe it” more often as in the manga and Japanese anime it is a verbal tick that he inherited from his mother and that half of Uzu portrayed as well. The writing style you use to describe and write gives enough detail without over doing it, keeping the readers attention and not tiring them out. I’ll admit that I read all 51 chapters in 2 days, it’s that’s good. I believe you could become a professional writer and make your own original works someday if you haven’t already. I’m gonna check out your other stories while I await an update for this masterpiece.
1AyanoZonuraiFor accidentally finding this fic looking up “ ac Desmond reborn in Naruto world” I am absolutely in love. I love the way you portray Naruto, Hinata, Anko, and even Kurenai. They aren’t completely OC , they actually still fit the original characteristics ,etc., and the story portrays their growth and development into who the are now. I think Naruto could say “Believe it” more often as in the manga and Japanese anime it is a verbal tick that he inherited from his mother and that half of Uzu portrayed as well. The writing style you use to describe and write gives enough detail without over doing it, keeping the readers attention and not tiring them out. I’ll admit that I read all 51 chapters in 2 days, it’s that’s good. I believe you could become a professional writer and make your own original works someday if you haven’t already. I’m gonna check out your other stories while I await an update for this masterpiece.
1/11 c2 Guest
Wait till he's twenty-something to do that recruiting crap. I refuse to continue reading if the first order of business after he's situated is building another brotherhood. I don't even like that fact that the brotherhood was compromised. The only reason I won't complain all that much is because he didn't willingly give that information. I still feel like he should have been more hostile after that though. He's eighteen. Make him feel like it. Also telling people he's from another world. After Anko, that junk better be put to rest.
Wait till he's twenty-something to do that recruiting crap. I refuse to continue reading if the first order of business after he's situated is building another brotherhood. I don't even like that fact that the brotherhood was compromised. The only reason I won't complain all that much is because he didn't willingly give that information. I still feel like he should have been more hostile after that though. He's eighteen. Make him feel like it. Also telling people he's from another world. After Anko, that junk better be put to rest.
12/4/2022 c51 2Crevanille
I'm so happy to see this st9ry get an update! Seriously though, hope things are going well.
Oh, b8g Fuu fan!
2CrevanilleI'm so happy to see this st9ry get an update! Seriously though, hope things are going well.
Oh, b8g Fuu fan!
12/2/2022 c51 DT
I would love to log in to leave this, but unfortunately cannot. This has been one of the greatest fanfics I've read in quite some time. Binge read this over a few days between work and it kept me hooked. I did have a question (and I might have missed it), was there any promotions from the Chuunin exam? It wouldn't affect how much I've enjoyed this, just curious.
I would love to log in to leave this, but unfortunately cannot. This has been one of the greatest fanfics I've read in quite some time. Binge read this over a few days between work and it kept me hooked. I did have a question (and I might have missed it), was there any promotions from the Chuunin exam? It wouldn't affect how much I've enjoyed this, just curious.
10/4/2022 c1 4Lord Mandragon
A very well written story. The characters are well written and the way it diverges from cannon, is both realistic and compelling. Everything comes together nicely. Excellent job.
4Lord MandragonA very well written story. The characters are well written and the way it diverges from cannon, is both realistic and compelling. Everything comes together nicely. Excellent job.
10/4/2022 c49 Lord Mandragon
A very well written story. The grammar and spelling are a bit wonky at the begining, but quickly improves. The story line is a great mix of the two franchises, the crecter
A very well written story. The grammar and spelling are a bit wonky at the begining, but quickly improves. The story line is a great mix of the two franchises, the crecter
9/28/2022 c5 Guest
Would be hilarious if Raphael had a space affinity or something from traveling franchises lol
Like dimensional cuts and apperation like in overlord and Harry Potter
Maybe portals like doctor strange
Ooh and bending space to shorten distance or to lengthen space
Like he could shorten distance to get a stab in from a distance
Maybe be as fast as flash (reacting to that speed is another thing) and make other things as fast too
Make kunais as fast as bullets and shuriken as buzz saw bullets
Or to dodge anything by lengthening distance for more time to dodge
Maybe make himself as thin as paper like the night buss in Harry Potter and dodge like the cp9 from one piece
Space is reeaaally versatile
One of the constants of the universe
Would be hilarious if Raphael had a space affinity or something from traveling franchises lol
Like dimensional cuts and apperation like in overlord and Harry Potter
Maybe portals like doctor strange
Ooh and bending space to shorten distance or to lengthen space
Like he could shorten distance to get a stab in from a distance
Maybe be as fast as flash (reacting to that speed is another thing) and make other things as fast too
Make kunais as fast as bullets and shuriken as buzz saw bullets
Or to dodge anything by lengthening distance for more time to dodge
Maybe make himself as thin as paper like the night buss in Harry Potter and dodge like the cp9 from one piece
Space is reeaaally versatile
One of the constants of the universe
9/25/2022 c51 Krieger Techpreist
Finally! I made it tomthe present!
Now I just got to say, wow. This is great, happy you make works, yes i have read your other stories, like this.
Cant wait for more.
Finally! I made it tomthe present!
Now I just got to say, wow. This is great, happy you make works, yes i have read your other stories, like this.
Cant wait for more.
9/13/2022 c29 Mugiii
the problem with As plan is that yugito would have given information about Kumo which would include big names and descriptions of them so how will B hide his identity as well as others?
the problem with As plan is that yugito would have given information about Kumo which would include big names and descriptions of them so how will B hide his identity as well as others?
9/7/2022 c51 AvatarUzumaki
great chapter. glad to see fuu made it safely to konoha, but will she be safe there with someone like danzo in the village? will sarutobi be able to placate the other villages? will they listen when he explains the threat of the akatsuki?
great chapter. glad to see fuu made it safely to konoha, but will she be safe there with someone like danzo in the village? will sarutobi be able to placate the other villages? will they listen when he explains the threat of the akatsuki?