for Shinobi's Creed5/17/2021 c25 
1Porthos10
it's a shame because i love your story and the concept but you have a pretty slow pace and the story will take 10 chapters for a super short arc. by then unless you give up or speed up the story, it's gonna end in a very long time, if ever.
1Porthos10it's a shame because i love your story and the concept but you have a pretty slow pace and the story will take 10 chapters for a super short arc. by then unless you give up or speed up the story, it's gonna end in a very long time, if ever.
5/17/2021 c16 Porthos10
Pourquoi chaque aspirant assassin doit aller voir sarutobi. Ils sont trop dépendants de lui et plus secret.
Pourquoi chaque aspirant assassin doit aller voir sarutobi. Ils sont trop dépendants de lui et plus secret.
5/13/2021 c48 AvatarUzumaki
wow jiraya needs to get over his pity party but im glad he realized he fucked up with Naruto. I just hope Naruto doesn't turn around and forgive the guy. glad Rafael is willing to put aside his anger at jiraya for hurting Naruto just to keep him safe but I still hope Naruto doesn't forgive jiraya. also I wonder what the hyugaa want with Hinata? hope they don't offer her to rejoin the clan after everything they did to her. I'm hoping that Hinata doesn't dress formally just to show the hyugaa that they don't control her anymore I look forward to the next chapter keep up the great work
wow jiraya needs to get over his pity party but im glad he realized he fucked up with Naruto. I just hope Naruto doesn't turn around and forgive the guy. glad Rafael is willing to put aside his anger at jiraya for hurting Naruto just to keep him safe but I still hope Naruto doesn't forgive jiraya. also I wonder what the hyugaa want with Hinata? hope they don't offer her to rejoin the clan after everything they did to her. I'm hoping that Hinata doesn't dress formally just to show the hyugaa that they don't control her anymore I look forward to the next chapter keep up the great work
5/2/2021 c43 1bronyroleplay5
Finally at chapter 43. It's been years since I found this masterpiece again. Danke for bringing this alive.
1bronyroleplay5Finally at chapter 43. It's been years since I found this masterpiece again. Danke for bringing this alive.
4/29/2021 c48 9UltimateAvengers
Since Yuki no Kuni doesn't need a bloodline to use Ice style, have you considered Naruto learning that version to survive against Akatsuki? And have Obito's story told to Sasuke by Kakashi to give him more indecision in whether or not to leave Konoha?
9UltimateAvengersSince Yuki no Kuni doesn't need a bloodline to use Ice style, have you considered Naruto learning that version to survive against Akatsuki? And have Obito's story told to Sasuke by Kakashi to give him more indecision in whether or not to leave Konoha?
4/29/2021 c12 Joshbbeer
Your shit all that training you described and naruto is a weekling common follow your own plot ffs
Your shit all that training you described and naruto is a weekling common follow your own plot ffs
4/21/2021 c48 19Dragon and Sword Master
A heavy emotional chapter for both yourself and the characters in your story...but something that needed to be done. I like how you handled Jiraiya personally and honestly wonder if Naruto will ever find it in his heart to forgive him...but only time will tell.
I'm also curious as to what Hiashi-teme wants with Anko and Hinata...
19Dragon and Sword MasterA heavy emotional chapter for both yourself and the characters in your story...but something that needed to be done. I like how you handled Jiraiya personally and honestly wonder if Naruto will ever find it in his heart to forgive him...but only time will tell.
I'm also curious as to what Hiashi-teme wants with Anko and Hinata...
4/15/2021 c48 Guest
I see that you write another chapter, i hope that Jiraya can continue ti teach fuinjutsu to Naruto and maybe can redeem himself, i know that in the next Will be the discussion between Hinata and the Hyuga clan, i am very interested to read how Will go, and don't think that you need any suggestion for this work and i hope that anynone Who write aginst you can at least write because i don't think so, have good luck and a nice day
I see that you write another chapter, i hope that Jiraya can continue ti teach fuinjutsu to Naruto and maybe can redeem himself, i know that in the next Will be the discussion between Hinata and the Hyuga clan, i am very interested to read how Will go, and don't think that you need any suggestion for this work and i hope that anynone Who write aginst you can at least write because i don't think so, have good luck and a nice day
4/5/2021 c48 8CCSakuraforever
Esta muy bueno el capítulo que se mostro un poco como porque la razón de jiraja de no cuidar a naruto que paso con los demás y hiruzen esta intentando ayudar para que naruto entienda un poco que pasará mas adelante
8CCSakuraforeverEsta muy bueno el capítulo que se mostro un poco como porque la razón de jiraja de no cuidar a naruto que paso con los demás y hiruzen esta intentando ayudar para que naruto entienda un poco que pasará mas adelante
4/4/2021 c48 34Zanzibar1
Great chapter as always! please don't let the naysayers get to you. the beauty of fanfics is how the writer can change 1 or more events and how they think those changes will trickle down the timeline. you are doing a great job in making a very realistic change and how it is affecting all the characters. it is far better than the instantaneous forgiveness most writers throw in there because they don't know how to pull in that emotional aspect.
also if the naysayers are flaming you this far in, then I have to question why they waste their time reading this fic if they really don't like it that much. i think this fic is fantastic. keep up the great work!
34Zanzibar1Great chapter as always! please don't let the naysayers get to you. the beauty of fanfics is how the writer can change 1 or more events and how they think those changes will trickle down the timeline. you are doing a great job in making a very realistic change and how it is affecting all the characters. it is far better than the instantaneous forgiveness most writers throw in there because they don't know how to pull in that emotional aspect.
also if the naysayers are flaming you this far in, then I have to question why they waste their time reading this fic if they really don't like it that much. i think this fic is fantastic. keep up the great work!
4/3/2021 c48 14Nain Tarlow
Man that was a pretty heavy chapter but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
I like how you protray Jiraiya, I saw too many fics where he is basked too much, shown as uncaring and living in his dream world or such. It's nice to see that he is human, he makes mistakes, but his thought process could be understood and even symphatize with him, yet still see that what he did was thr wrong choice.
Looking forward to the next chapter and what happens with Hinata. Keep up the good work
14Nain TarlowMan that was a pretty heavy chapter but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
I like how you protray Jiraiya, I saw too many fics where he is basked too much, shown as uncaring and living in his dream world or such. It's nice to see that he is human, he makes mistakes, but his thought process could be understood and even symphatize with him, yet still see that what he did was thr wrong choice.
Looking forward to the next chapter and what happens with Hinata. Keep up the good work
4/3/2021 c48 139Scififan33
Great story! I don't usually like so many OC's in mainish roles but you've done it really well. Feel so sad for Itachi and his fiancé, hope they get a happy ending. Their poor thinking her son is a traitor too, will they ever tell her the truth? Hoping that with his clan, especially his Mum, around that Sasuke won't go to Orochimaru. Yes, Itachi needs to keep his cover but hopefully he doesn't end up pushing Sasuke to go there.
This Naruto is so much more competent, I like it! Was very happy to see his summons finally get used for something. Not the best way to find out about his godfather. Even if he never forgives him, hope he at least lets him explain so that he has all the facts.
Very interesting changes to the chuunin exam. Glad Sarutobi lived!
Do the clan really think Hinata would want to come back after the way they treated her? Wow they are idiots.
look forward to more!
139Scififan33Great story! I don't usually like so many OC's in mainish roles but you've done it really well. Feel so sad for Itachi and his fiancé, hope they get a happy ending. Their poor thinking her son is a traitor too, will they ever tell her the truth? Hoping that with his clan, especially his Mum, around that Sasuke won't go to Orochimaru. Yes, Itachi needs to keep his cover but hopefully he doesn't end up pushing Sasuke to go there.
This Naruto is so much more competent, I like it! Was very happy to see his summons finally get used for something. Not the best way to find out about his godfather. Even if he never forgives him, hope he at least lets him explain so that he has all the facts.
Very interesting changes to the chuunin exam. Glad Sarutobi lived!
Do the clan really think Hinata would want to come back after the way they treated her? Wow they are idiots.
look forward to more!
4/2/2021 c11 Scififan33
was hoping Itachi could be spared his fate of having to run, especially when he had a fiancé show up. Hate to think what he made her see.
So Naruto froze up since he's never faced a real fight? at least he managed to get the sword but ouch, young for his first kill.
was hoping Itachi could be spared his fate of having to run, especially when he had a fiancé show up. Hate to think what he made her see.
So Naruto froze up since he's never faced a real fight? at least he managed to get the sword but ouch, young for his first kill.