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28Thebestoftherest
Wonder when the other shoe would drop on Jiraiya, although we didn't get a lot od stuff with Naruto being an assassin a problem when copying the series plot too closelt. It a good story just need to be more different.
28ThebestoftherestWonder when the other shoe would drop on Jiraiya, although we didn't get a lot od stuff with Naruto being an assassin a problem when copying the series plot too closelt. It a good story just need to be more different.
11/16/2020 c47 Scarease
What about you Tsunacde your his Godmother .Personally as Itachi i would just killed Danzou for being back stabbing old Sack of Flesh .World would be a better place .Hell set things up so wood release user some other anbu become its leader some that is loyal and Understand the ideal that Konoha founded on and would do best to preserve them .
What about you Tsunacde your his Godmother .Personally as Itachi i would just killed Danzou for being back stabbing old Sack of Flesh .World would be a better place .Hell set things up so wood release user some other anbu become its leader some that is loyal and Understand the ideal that Konoha founded on and would do best to preserve them .
11/16/2020 c47 George Cristian810
I truly hope that naruto wont forgive jiraya and that he will not train him . In canon the training was a massive joke . 3 years and he only learned to use kyuubi chakra and some jutsu agaisnt 2 s class missing nins with abilities to fight agaisnt kyuubi chakra ? Is jiraya an idiot or he didnt care about naruto . And also before the chuunin exam teaching him only summons who wont help him at all agaisnt neji .
I truly hope that naruto wont forgive jiraya and that he will not train him . In canon the training was a massive joke . 3 years and he only learned to use kyuubi chakra and some jutsu agaisnt 2 s class missing nins with abilities to fight agaisnt kyuubi chakra ? Is jiraya an idiot or he didnt care about naruto . And also before the chuunin exam teaching him only summons who wont help him at all agaisnt neji .
11/15/2020 c3 Vl4d
I am enjoying this story a lot, I normally don leave reviews as my english is not native and I read for both enjoyment and practice. With that in mind, and hoping you take no offence, I would like to point out that 'descansa en la paz' translates to 'rest in the peace'... what you wanted to use was 'descansa en paz' that translates to 'rest in peace'.
Again, thank you for the good story!
I am enjoying this story a lot, I normally don leave reviews as my english is not native and I read for both enjoyment and practice. With that in mind, and hoping you take no offence, I would like to point out that 'descansa en la paz' translates to 'rest in the peace'... what you wanted to use was 'descansa en paz' that translates to 'rest in peace'.
Again, thank you for the good story!
11/15/2020 c47 KnightOfZaku
Awesome chapter!
Please don't have Naruto forgive Jiraiya in just a chapter or two. In fact I'm actually hoping he doesn't even consider forgiving him until we are well into Shippuden.
Awesome chapter!
Please don't have Naruto forgive Jiraiya in just a chapter or two. In fact I'm actually hoping he doesn't even consider forgiving him until we are well into Shippuden.
11/15/2020 c47 101VFSNAKE
Good chapter. So now Naruto knows the truth. Yet Orochimaru got away. Damn! I imagine even Hiruzen will have to explain some things since Naruto will put two and two together knowing the Sandaime knew the truth too. Should be interesting to see how that conversation (yelling from Naruto) turns out.
101VFSNAKEGood chapter. So now Naruto knows the truth. Yet Orochimaru got away. Damn! I imagine even Hiruzen will have to explain some things since Naruto will put two and two together knowing the Sandaime knew the truth too. Should be interesting to see how that conversation (yelling from Naruto) turns out.
11/15/2020 c47 1Dracarot
Jiraiya once again learning that sometimes the cover up is worse than the crime.
Oi, don't be down on yourself for playing a fighter, they are an awesome class, though I personally prefer the battle master and Eldrtich knights.
But boy if your going down the rabbit hole that is Barovia, your in for a doozy for your first outing...
1DracarotJiraiya once again learning that sometimes the cover up is worse than the crime.
Oi, don't be down on yourself for playing a fighter, they are an awesome class, though I personally prefer the battle master and Eldrtich knights.
But boy if your going down the rabbit hole that is Barovia, your in for a doozy for your first outing...
11/15/2020 c47 55brown phantom
I like Naruto's response to Jiraiya at the end. He really can't explain his absence and silence. Not in any way that doesn't incriminate himself further.
I also like how the conversation with Tsunade went here. The fact is at this point of the story and with her current mindset she was rather bitchy but the problem is making her not look unreasonable or unchangeable about it. I feel like this exchange showed how uncaring she was at first but had a natural lead into her realizing that she was wrong too.
55brown phantomI like Naruto's response to Jiraiya at the end. He really can't explain his absence and silence. Not in any way that doesn't incriminate himself further.
I also like how the conversation with Tsunade went here. The fact is at this point of the story and with her current mindset she was rather bitchy but the problem is making her not look unreasonable or unchangeable about it. I feel like this exchange showed how uncaring she was at first but had a natural lead into her realizing that she was wrong too.
11/15/2020 c47 thedarkwolf95
seeing as when you started this fic Assassins Creed was a very different franchise, will you be adding elements from the recent games into this fic
seeing as when you started this fic Assassins Creed was a very different franchise, will you be adding elements from the recent games into this fic