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4/18/2013 c1 dede
Make another 1! One with elena plz, maybe? MAKE A DELENA STORY!
2/11/2013 c1 2Pheonix of the Night
This just made me cry... I wish I had someone to speak these words to me... To bare their soul and love to me... But sadly all I have is nothing but the beating of an aching heart and this story.
11/28/2012 c1 15simbagirl
Aww, cute Bamon! Loved it.

Just one thing, isnt it propose TO her, not propose her?
11/23/2012 c1 34J S Arnold
Wow :-) I found myself smiling as I read this. I love it :-)
11/21/2012 c1 elenaserrani
Wow It's very cute! they are so sweet and romantic specially Damon
11/21/2012 c1 23xXPrincess-of-DarknessxXx
Oh my god that was so Sweet and romantic :)) I Love it :D
11/21/2012 c1 19Lula9167
This is... amazing. I liked how you combined the narrative voice with the interations of the characters. The use of Pablo Neruda's poem was an excellent choise. I loved it. I think you do have a romantic side in your writing just trust in it. Love it!

ps: Remember to include the disclaimer for the poem too. If you don't want to spoil for us the use the poem with a disclaimer at the beginning you can write it at the end. You mention at the end it was a Pablo Neruda's poem you just need to add the disclaimer part.

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