for Of Pleasure & Pain Original TwiKinkFest One-shot Version8/1/2015 c1 oh my
im reading this again and its just as painful as the first time.. oh goodness! it hurts so good i cant stop
im reading this again and its just as painful as the first time.. oh goodness! it hurts so good i cant stop
6/8/2014 c1 RubyDee
I read this a while back. Looking forward to rereading the full version that I had to put on ho;ld when rl took over.
Glad to see you back writing another story. :)
I read this a while back. Looking forward to rereading the full version that I had to put on ho;ld when rl took over.
Glad to see you back writing another story. :)
5/26/2014 c1 Guest
edwards an ass! bella you are an independent woman!
edwards an ass! bella you are an independent woman!
12/26/2012 c1 
4musicalvoice
I LOVE the way the one shot ends. I'm also reading the extended version, and I can't wait for resolution. Great story!
4musicalvoiceI LOVE the way the one shot ends. I'm also reading the extended version, and I can't wait for resolution. Great story!
11/25/2012 c1 Rachel Garber
It is a hot scene, but how unfair that he plays it out with her best friend instead of his own wife, rotten Edward.
It is a hot scene, but how unfair that he plays it out with her best friend instead of his own wife, rotten Edward.
11/22/2012 c1 Guest
And this here is why Bella can NEVER, EVER go back to that scumbag. I don't even understand how sher can have any feeling except hate for him. He is lucky though because the night he came back, he would have to fish for his dick in the river just like that idiot john Bobbitt if I were his wife.
And this here is why Bella can NEVER, EVER go back to that scumbag. I don't even understand how sher can have any feeling except hate for him. He is lucky though because the night he came back, he would have to fish for his dick in the river just like that idiot john Bobbitt if I were his wife.
11/21/2012 c1 mommymac0508
I love it again still hard to read but it's written so good just can't help it
I love it again still hard to read but it's written so good just can't help it
11/21/2012 c1 2SandytheSandstorm
Amazing! This was such an astounding chapter. Read it a few times and loved it. Now get to work on chapter 17
2SandytheSandstormAmazing! This was such an astounding chapter. Read it a few times and loved it. Now get to work on chapter 17