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1/21 c15 15Slytherin Princess Nysa
Lmao obviously she’s not dead if she’s still thinking
1/21 c5 Slytherin Princess Nysa
Me, realizing that she’s in the HG with KatnissPeeta: SIS THEY CANT DIE THEY START THE REBELLION
4/13/2017 c4 1Purplestan
This is so stupid you clearly don't know finnick's character at all GOODBYE
4/13/2017 c3 Purplestan
Right are you being right now? Finnick was not a playboy. He was a prostitute and he only did that to keep his family safe. He didn't want to do it. Do you seriously think he's a playboy?
4/13/2017 c2 Purplestan
You've got this abit wrong in this chapter there is a flashback where finnick is 12 and the OC is 11 meaning they are one year apart. You also said that the OC was in her last year of going to reaping's so that makes her 18 meaning finnick is 19 however finnick won the 65th games when he was 14 meaning in the 75th games he is 24 so in the games the OC is in the 74th that makes him 23. But that doesn't make much sense if he's one year older than the oc.
12/8/2015 c21 Cleo9427
There are MANY things wrong with this story. Rape victims don't just bounce back from something like that. "Y'all" should NEVER be used in a a fanfiction based of a story like this. You shouldn't have had her in the same games as Peeta and Katniss because it takes away from their story. I kno I said this already but I'll say it again cus I can't stress that enough. RAPE VICTUMS DONT JUST BOUNCE BACK FROM SOMETHING LIKE THAT! And when she found out that she was pregnant with her rapist's baby don't make her act like it's all happy happy joy joy! The dude took her virginity and as proof left her with a baby. At least give her some conflicted feelings! The first two chapters were better than the entire story. This needs A LOT of work
9/12/2015 c1 Guest
Oh... my... GOD... There aren't words... just wow. Well done!
9/12/2015 c21 19Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967
i loved this story! towards the end i almost cried it was that good! keep up the good work!
3/7/2015 c18 patrioxic
The use of 'Y'all' should be exempt from stories that wish to be taken seriously. Why the heck she digresses into slang in this chapter, I will never fathom.
3/7/2015 c15 patrioxic
"Wet piece of lead"...? Really?
7/27/2014 c21 mariah smiley
That was so good I cried! 3
6/20/2014 c20 katie93319
Cant wait for the sequel! What a dramatic way to end I love your story. I read all the first 19 chapters in one night and went to bed right afterwards so I never reviewed. Sorry about that. Will you make an announcement on this story when the sequel comes out?
6/20/2014 c20 michelle88222
Well that has just dropped a bomb! :P Loved the story, and looking forward to the sequel! :)
6/19/2014 c19 sweetdreams705
I know you have probably gotten this question a lot but will you be writing a sequel for Catching Fire and possibly for Mocking Jay?
6/18/2014 c19 4xxxMiss-Bella-Swanxxx
Cant wait to see the rest of the story unfold! :)
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