for Vengeance: A Black Flames Side Story7/8/2020 c1 Idknows
Hello from 2020, the year when The World Fell Into Chaos.
Nice prologue and I'm still reading the main story. it's long and has A LOT of words. I've only reached 3k words in a chapter as my high score, yet you do 10k at least...WHAT ARE YOU?!
Hello from 2020, the year when The World Fell Into Chaos.
Nice prologue and I'm still reading the main story. it's long and has A LOT of words. I've only reached 3k words in a chapter as my high score, yet you do 10k at least...WHAT ARE YOU?!
12/24/2014 c1 
8Wolf and MR Lover
I'm very excited to see Naruto's plan in action, though considering this was posted about 2 years ago, I'm a little concerned.
8Wolf and MR LoverI'm very excited to see Naruto's plan in action, though considering this was posted about 2 years ago, I'm a little concerned.
5/7/2014 c1 Iryelb
You should probably put where exactly in the Black Flames this is supposed to take place, but otherwise I think this sounds very interesting and I look forward to reading more of these.
You should probably put where exactly in the Black Flames this is supposed to take place, but otherwise I think this sounds very interesting and I look forward to reading more of these.
1/11/2014 c1 chazman89
I am very interested in seeing what Naruto does to Hiashi, over all the rest. and yeah, being a paralegal or a legal assistant is a pain. we do a lot more work then people think.
I am very interested in seeing what Naruto does to Hiashi, over all the rest. and yeah, being a paralegal or a legal assistant is a pain. we do a lot more work then people think.
8/5/2013 c1 5PhoenixNaye
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really curiuos about whats going to happen. You've got me on the edge of my seat.
5PhoenixNayeCan't wait for the next chapter. I'm really curiuos about whats going to happen. You've got me on the edge of my seat.
6/17/2013 c1 1Sinclaire Silverfang
are you still planning to update this little side quip. oh and do you mind if i adopt a quote or two on your profile?
1Sinclaire Silverfangare you still planning to update this little side quip. oh and do you mind if i adopt a quote or two on your profile?
5/3/2013 c1 NF15617
This is a very interesting idea that I really want to see more of, though I really do hope that it won't distract you too much from Black Flames as that is the superior of the two works. I do have one question that pertains to both of the stories though, I just want to know for certain if Kakashi is truly dead or not, I think that he is but I've been wrong with story assumptions before now.
Other than that this is a nice solution on how to add to the feel of Black Flames while not having to go all out on another filler chapter, plus it will be nice to see some more violence again.
This is a very interesting idea that I really want to see more of, though I really do hope that it won't distract you too much from Black Flames as that is the superior of the two works. I do have one question that pertains to both of the stories though, I just want to know for certain if Kakashi is truly dead or not, I think that he is but I've been wrong with story assumptions before now.
Other than that this is a nice solution on how to add to the feel of Black Flames while not having to go all out on another filler chapter, plus it will be nice to see some more violence again.
2/25/2013 c1 7The Fifth Rider of Armageddon
Huh this came out last year...well dang I feel like I cut something important out. Anyways I like the concept of his twisted revenge that is justified, to tell you the truth I'm actually a little nervous at the last part of the special. I have read this from the beginning and been a loyal fan to this story, heak I have even tried to make mine as awesome as yours as well, and I have seen all the dark things you can write.
...honestly I have no idea where I am going with this. But I will have you know that regardless of how twisted, violent, and cruel the last part will be I will still continue to read, review, and enjoy this no matter what. So, I can't wait to see the next chapters, take it easy Jason.
7The Fifth Rider of ArmageddonHuh this came out last year...well dang I feel like I cut something important out. Anyways I like the concept of his twisted revenge that is justified, to tell you the truth I'm actually a little nervous at the last part of the special. I have read this from the beginning and been a loyal fan to this story, heak I have even tried to make mine as awesome as yours as well, and I have seen all the dark things you can write.
...honestly I have no idea where I am going with this. But I will have you know that regardless of how twisted, violent, and cruel the last part will be I will still continue to read, review, and enjoy this no matter what. So, I can't wait to see the next chapters, take it easy Jason.