for Champion of Champions12/29/2017 c12 Guest
Eh Adam opening up to May, siding with May against Ash... some friend
Eh Adam opening up to May, siding with May against Ash... some friend
12/29/2017 c13 Guest
Cynthia/OC really?
Cynthia/OC really?
12/28/2017 c4 Guest
Interesting idea. Are you going to have Cynthia or Lance show up?
Interesting idea. Are you going to have Cynthia or Lance show up?
11/29/2017 c43 Guest
Big bang theory, really?
Big bang theory, really?
11/28/2017 c43 Draconiumpower
Very nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, nice reference to Big Bang Theory.
Very nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, nice reference to Big Bang Theory.
11/16/2017 c43 Guest
The Big Bang Theory :D :D :D
The Big Bang Theory :D :D :D
11/17/2017 c43 
1sorarocks531
Ash should call Roark for training advice... And I'm so glad May go Amaura. :D
Great chapter!
1sorarocks531Ash should call Roark for training advice... And I'm so glad May go Amaura. :D
Great chapter!
11/15/2017 c43 3Hudy Leak613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
3Hudy Leak613Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
11/12/2017 c43 Phoenix
Good t9 see y9u again.. and you made me loose 72 dollars on Manaphy (glad he is still in), but Arceus damn are both May and Ash's pokemon that Desperate on their live life.
Also I can inmagine charizard's bet better
Good t9 see y9u again.. and you made me loose 72 dollars on Manaphy (glad he is still in), but Arceus damn are both May and Ash's pokemon that Desperate on their live life.
Also I can inmagine charizard's bet better
11/12/2017 c43 Kal
I cannot believe u put the tbbt main cast in this chapter
I cannot believe u put the tbbt main cast in this chapter
11/13/2017 c43 Swift Australian Winds
You had me squealing at the scene with manaphy. So cute! I loved the rest of the chapter as well, nice to see what the other pokemon are up to.
You had me squealing at the scene with manaphy. So cute! I loved the rest of the chapter as well, nice to see what the other pokemon are up to.
11/12/2017 c43 2Inspired Soledad
Glad to see the update! I absolutely love this story! I'm eager to see how Cranidos responds to Ash and everyone on the team. Looking forward to your next update!
2Inspired SoledadGlad to see the update! I absolutely love this story! I'm eager to see how Cranidos responds to Ash and everyone on the team. Looking forward to your next update!
11/12/2017 c43 Advanceshipping
nice chapter. I was thinking about sending you a friendly question as to whether you were having trouble, but clearly unnecessary now.
nice chapter. I was thinking about sending you a friendly question as to whether you were having trouble, but clearly unnecessary now.