for Champion of Champions12/18/2022 c10 
24Wise Lion 17
*sighs frustratingly* I am about to bust my gut here y'all. Seriously now, even a blind man can see your attraction to each other a mile away! Haha, these two.
24Wise Lion 17*sighs frustratingly* I am about to bust my gut here y'all. Seriously now, even a blind man can see your attraction to each other a mile away! Haha, these two.
8/26/2022 c13 Phoenix'sStars
I really liked the story at the start but it's becoming a little to overdramatic for me at this point in Ch. 13. I would think Ash would be a lot more confident and not as dense at (I think I remember correctly) 21.
I really liked the story at the start but it's becoming a little to overdramatic for me at this point in Ch. 13. I would think Ash would be a lot more confident and not as dense at (I think I remember correctly) 21.
7/13/2022 c15 14Stormburst
For me the best story I've ever read. I really hope you haven't given up. I would love to see the end of this amazing story.
14StormburstFor me the best story I've ever read. I really hope you haven't given up. I would love to see the end of this amazing story.
5/16/2022 c47 Winter Arctica
Awwww depressing to see this story just die and not reach its end. It was one if my first fanfics ever and really cherished this story. At least itll always have that amazing start, and awesome how you gave ash his trusted lucario before canon did. I know life, especially with everything else thrown on top of it was likely too much, but hope you see you come back someday.
Awwww depressing to see this story just die and not reach its end. It was one if my first fanfics ever and really cherished this story. At least itll always have that amazing start, and awesome how you gave ash his trusted lucario before canon did. I know life, especially with everything else thrown on top of it was likely too much, but hope you see you come back someday.
4/20/2022 c47 wolfstorm9876
I just found this story a few days ago. it's an amazing story. it's become one of my favorites. looking forward to the next chapter.
I just found this story a few days ago. it's an amazing story. it's become one of my favorites. looking forward to the next chapter.
12/27/2021 c4 Aedwards179
so gyarados is strong enough to take on his strongest Pokemon but it couldn't beat broxs steelix in a 1 on 1?
so gyarados is strong enough to take on his strongest Pokemon but it couldn't beat broxs steelix in a 1 on 1?
12/27/2021 c1 Aedwards179
damn ash has that much trouble fighting some random chick who got top 4 in a league?
damn ash has that much trouble fighting some random chick who got top 4 in a league?
11/12/2021 c47 Advanceshipper AaMayL
Yes it was worth the wait I hope Ash realises his feelings for May (Best couple) soon keep up the great work looking forward to the next update
Yes it was worth the wait I hope Ash realises his feelings for May (Best couple) soon keep up the great work looking forward to the next update
8/13/2021 c47 Reader
I was almost expecting the Leader to be Gary
I was almost expecting the Leader to be Gary
8/13/2021 c46 Reader
Who is it?
Who is it?
8/13/2021 c45 Reader
What got them DQ?
What got them DQ?
8/13/2021 c44 Reader
May being recognized was good
Never expected a Pallet contest
May being recognized was good
Never expected a Pallet contest
8/13/2021 c43 Reader
Fossil Pokémon
Fossil Pokémon