for Champion of Champions2/20/2013 c4 nick
Uptade next chapter soon
Uptade next chapter soon
2/19/2013 c4 Haha
Nice please update
Nice please update
2/14/2013 c4 
1MMJ.Rich
I have a guess as to who is gonna help Ash, but I won't say just yet. This was a great chapter. A couple punctuation errors, but nothing a good proof read won't fix.
Ash: I see that he already has a Gyarados, so forget my last idea. For an electric-type, let him catch an Elekid or Magnamite.
May: being a co-ordinator, she will need a pretty pokemon. Maybe an Abra that will evolve into Kedabra, but will choose not to evolve in Alakazam.
1MMJ.RichI have a guess as to who is gonna help Ash, but I won't say just yet. This was a great chapter. A couple punctuation errors, but nothing a good proof read won't fix.
Ash: I see that he already has a Gyarados, so forget my last idea. For an electric-type, let him catch an Elekid or Magnamite.
May: being a co-ordinator, she will need a pretty pokemon. Maybe an Abra that will evolve into Kedabra, but will choose not to evolve in Alakazam.
2/14/2013 c3 MMJ.Rich
I love advanceshipping and this is one of the best I have seen.
Ash should catch a Magikarp. He has always liked weak pokemon and trained them up to be strong.
I love advanceshipping and this is one of the best I have seen.
Ash should catch a Magikarp. He has always liked weak pokemon and trained them up to be strong.
2/13/2013 c4 Baracudaz
Great story, I love to read story's with Ash as a powerfull trainer, maybe you can let Ash have the Spiritomb and shiny Metagross from the Sinnoh season, I always liked those but I can't seem to find them in one of the story's centered on Sinnoh.
Update soon!
Great story, I love to read story's with Ash as a powerfull trainer, maybe you can let Ash have the Spiritomb and shiny Metagross from the Sinnoh season, I always liked those but I can't seem to find them in one of the story's centered on Sinnoh.
Update soon!
2/13/2013 c4 1FancyBlaziken
I'd say make him catch an Ampharos or a Manetric. Also can't wait for the next chapter
1FancyBlazikenI'd say make him catch an Ampharos or a Manetric. Also can't wait for the next chapter
2/13/2013 c4 Runeberg
Hello! I just wanted to say that your story is GREAT. The beginning of this story is just like from my imagination. Ash is older, he is more like an adult (well not surprizing if he is over 20-year-old) and the most important part, he knows how battle and train his pokemons to become the greatest trainer in the world. I have read some stories where Ash is older and stronger etc, but then he is like a superman, so nobody can't beat him. I hope that he truly loses some times and has some problems with his pokemon and relationships (relationship between May and Ash is nice, I'd truly like to see how that develops because it's a great addition to this story), you know what I mean.
I truly don't care what kind of pokemon Ash, May or everyone else are catching (or maybe Ash should have an Eevee, heehee). Definetely not legendaries, and... Maybe not pokemons on their last form. But it's up to you, because you are "the boss" of this story, you know how it should/will develop. But about electric-type, I want that Ash catches an Elekid. Definetely. There are couple reasons for the Elekid IMO: 1) Elekid is strong pokemon with a lot of potential, and he is able to use loads of different attacks when he evolves 2) Paul has an Electivire, and there could be rivalry/romance between those pokemon...? 3) I see Elekid/Electabuzz/Electivires nature a little bit michievous but also brave, so that kind of nature would give a little pain for Ash's training on him (little bit ignoring...). 4) When training with Elekid finally succees (i.e Elekid is Electivire, and a real badass asskicker), Pikachu starts to think his own strenght or strenght-less, and maybe we will see a thunderstone..? Other options could be Galvantula or Jolteon, but I still think that Elekid is the best option for Ash and the story.
But that's my review! I hope you find that useful! :) There might be some "funny words", but I am from Finland so try to understand :D But anyway, I am truly looking for the next chapter of this story!
Hello! I just wanted to say that your story is GREAT. The beginning of this story is just like from my imagination. Ash is older, he is more like an adult (well not surprizing if he is over 20-year-old) and the most important part, he knows how battle and train his pokemons to become the greatest trainer in the world. I have read some stories where Ash is older and stronger etc, but then he is like a superman, so nobody can't beat him. I hope that he truly loses some times and has some problems with his pokemon and relationships (relationship between May and Ash is nice, I'd truly like to see how that develops because it's a great addition to this story), you know what I mean.
I truly don't care what kind of pokemon Ash, May or everyone else are catching (or maybe Ash should have an Eevee, heehee). Definetely not legendaries, and... Maybe not pokemons on their last form. But it's up to you, because you are "the boss" of this story, you know how it should/will develop. But about electric-type, I want that Ash catches an Elekid. Definetely. There are couple reasons for the Elekid IMO: 1) Elekid is strong pokemon with a lot of potential, and he is able to use loads of different attacks when he evolves 2) Paul has an Electivire, and there could be rivalry/romance between those pokemon...? 3) I see Elekid/Electabuzz/Electivires nature a little bit michievous but also brave, so that kind of nature would give a little pain for Ash's training on him (little bit ignoring...). 4) When training with Elekid finally succees (i.e Elekid is Electivire, and a real badass asskicker), Pikachu starts to think his own strenght or strenght-less, and maybe we will see a thunderstone..? Other options could be Galvantula or Jolteon, but I still think that Elekid is the best option for Ash and the story.
But that's my review! I hope you find that useful! :) There might be some "funny words", but I am from Finland so try to understand :D But anyway, I am truly looking for the next chapter of this story!
2/13/2013 c4 1DizzyDiana
I really love it. This time with the surprise about Brock remembering about Mewtwo & Dragonite as well as May & Lucy seeing Dragonite, Gyarados, & Lucario for the first time (except for May of course). Now Team Rocket had kidnapped May from Ash, I wonder who will help him get her back. I also hope that Ash uses Dragonite, Lucario, & Gyarados in battle against Team Rocket & what about Meowth? Will he help Ash get May back as well as help him & will Ash let him travel along with him & May when they head for Cerulean City where Misty is. I can't wait to see the battle against Misty. I want to see her reactions when she sees Ash's new & stronger pokemon like Dragonite & Gyarados. Please update soon. I'll think of some Pokemon for Ash & May to catch along their journey in Kanto. Good Luck! I hope this will help you with some of your next chapters to come. :)
1DizzyDianaI really love it. This time with the surprise about Brock remembering about Mewtwo & Dragonite as well as May & Lucy seeing Dragonite, Gyarados, & Lucario for the first time (except for May of course). Now Team Rocket had kidnapped May from Ash, I wonder who will help him get her back. I also hope that Ash uses Dragonite, Lucario, & Gyarados in battle against Team Rocket & what about Meowth? Will he help Ash get May back as well as help him & will Ash let him travel along with him & May when they head for Cerulean City where Misty is. I can't wait to see the battle against Misty. I want to see her reactions when she sees Ash's new & stronger pokemon like Dragonite & Gyarados. Please update soon. I'll think of some Pokemon for Ash & May to catch along their journey in Kanto. Good Luck! I hope this will help you with some of your next chapters to come. :)
2/13/2013 c4 6Lightningblade49
Pokemonwise Ash:Drapion,Aggron and Honchkrow.
May: Butterfree,Mudkip & Nidoqueen.
Great Fic but id have 2 things to say.
grow some balls and leave team Rocket
, Capture Team rocket instead of Blasting them off and give them to Jennyso there no Longer a headache. Although I think this is the Last Straw for Ash I Wouldn't be able to put up with them this long without attempt to permanenetly removing them from the Picture.
6Lightningblade49Pokemonwise Ash:Drapion,Aggron and Honchkrow.
May: Butterfree,Mudkip & Nidoqueen.
Great Fic but id have 2 things to say.
grow some balls and leave team Rocket
, Capture Team rocket instead of Blasting them off and give them to Jennyso there no Longer a headache. Although I think this is the Last Straw for Ash I Wouldn't be able to put up with them this long without attempt to permanenetly removing them from the Picture.
2/13/2013 c3 Lightningblade49
That Eggs A Magby I believe if he's getting an Electric Type maybe an Electa buzz or that magenmite Ash befriends when he catch's Muk.
That Eggs A Magby I believe if he's getting an Electric Type maybe an Electa buzz or that magenmite Ash befriends when he catch's Muk.
2/12/2013 c4 5lucarioADV
Been waiting for a while, and finally a update on one of my favorite stories. Guess it would be cool if Ash captured Zapdos or Raiku. May should catch Manaphy. Can't wait for the next
5lucarioADVBeen waiting for a while, and finally a update on one of my favorite stories. Guess it would be cool if Ash captured Zapdos or Raiku. May should catch Manaphy. Can't wait for the next