for Champion of Champions12/6/2012 c2 Guest
I really love this story! You are doing a great job! Please update soon!
I really love this story! You are doing a great job! Please update soon!
12/6/2012 c2 Quinten
This was so cool I hope you show ash in all the regions and he wins. I also hope that this will be a long Story.
This was so cool I hope you show ash in all the regions and he wins. I also hope that this will be a long Story.
12/6/2012 c2 
9SupernalGodzilla
OH MY GOD! THIS IS ONE OF GREATEST ADVANCESHIPPING STORIES I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!
Please continue on... PLEASE!
9SupernalGodzillaOH MY GOD! THIS IS ONE OF GREATEST ADVANCESHIPPING STORIES I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!
Please continue on... PLEASE!
11/29/2012 c1 7jh831
god start
i think ash is going to demolish the indigo league, hope he does
indigo was always my favorite, cant wait to see the original gym leaders reactions to ash. also cant wait to see surge go against picachu again, that is going to be funny,
cant wait to see what is going to happen next
7jh831god start
i think ash is going to demolish the indigo league, hope he does
indigo was always my favorite, cant wait to see the original gym leaders reactions to ash. also cant wait to see surge go against picachu again, that is going to be funny,
cant wait to see what is going to happen next
11/23/2012 c1 Guest
This is a great chapter. I like how you made Ash oblivious even if he is older. Please update soon.
This is a great chapter. I like how you made Ash oblivious even if he is older. Please update soon.
11/23/2012 c1 Guest
Great start to the story keep it up. :)
Great start to the story keep it up. :)
11/23/2012 c1 8The Perfect Replica
Please Update. This is the best story I've read by far. And I didn't see any mistakes or errors. Advanceshipping is the best.
8The Perfect ReplicaPlease Update. This is the best story I've read by far. And I didn't see any mistakes or errors. Advanceshipping is the best.