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11/25/2012 c1 LoveMeryl
Oh Wow! I always thought he should have heard what she said to Jim. This is even better than I imagined!

I hope you had a great Bday!
11/24/2012 c1 14lilacmermaid33
Not what I expected, but I like how you did this so that it could fit seamlessly into the actual episode! And I like how you showed that his thoughts keep returning to Mac, no matter how hard he tries.

Happy Birthday!
11/23/2012 c1 3landingzone
Nice piece. Happy birthday, enjoy it!
11/23/2012 c1 9Build Up to the Fall
I could not clink on the link fast enough! AHH oh, I love this story so much, and what a fantastic idea you had! I love that you had Will overhear and see Mac, and oh dear the feels! Amazing!
11/23/2012 c1 Wm
Happy bday! Great story!
11/23/2012 c1 37iworkwithpens
Love it! I always wondered about that one too...maybe, just maybe he heard her say it? Congrats on the 20 by 20 and Happy Birthday!
11/23/2012 c1 1millie.zhang
Wonderful!

I love the way you analyzed Will's thoughts...

Poor Mac, how could she think she deserved all this...She should have deserved WILL!

Yup I thought he might give her a hug as well...anyway, we did see a HUG later on the show which melted all of us ... *my favorite scene in Season 1*...*smile*

Happy Birthday:-):-)
11/23/2012 c1 9Katycat1970
Short but very very very sweet... LOVED it - as always!

Loved Will's thoughts on this and it made me giggle how he couldn't concentrate without her taking over his mind... :)
Very much like Will's subconscious mind... sneaky bastard indeed! lol...

"The sad truth was that he wanted to give in. No matter how much he had urges to punish Mackenzie for what she had done to him, there were an equal number of urges to do all sorts of other things to her that could definitely not be classified as hurtful; more like loving, caring, adoring, passionate…and so on" - lovely line and so true - frustrating that he hasn't given in yet...!

Great as always matey - throughly enjoyed it... LOVE your writing (but I think you know that)...

(Is is bad to think - hmmm - I hope you get depressed as we get another story?! NOOOO - just kidding... promise! Congratulations on the 20 by 20! Very impressed)!

xxx
11/23/2012 c1 forjustaminute
WOW awesome interpretation of Will's thoughts...

I thought he might give her a hug on the terrace or something...but this is so good!

Happy Birthday:-)

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