11/27/2012 c1 28Flamewing80
Interesting. I really liked it. This was a very creative way of showing Lilith's death.
Interesting. I really liked it. This was a very creative way of showing Lilith's death.
11/26/2012 c1 Kaidou
I'm so glad to read this! I've been really looking forward to it. 'grin' I'm still amazed that you can make the characters' personalities so distinctive in so few words. Not just between Lilith and her nanomachines, or Cain and Lilith, but the 01 and 04 nanomachines as well! Cain's nano's strike me as more sadistic, and Lilith's nano's as more protective (but not in a sympathetic sort of way - the 'queen of the world' part gave me this impression) and concerned with self-preservation like all the Krusnik nanomachines (the 'you (we) will never die' is a dead give away).
I'm so glad you're writing one for all the Krusniks. I can't to read the others! Squee!
Kadiou
PS: to lazy to log-in right now.
I'm so glad to read this! I've been really looking forward to it. 'grin' I'm still amazed that you can make the characters' personalities so distinctive in so few words. Not just between Lilith and her nanomachines, or Cain and Lilith, but the 01 and 04 nanomachines as well! Cain's nano's strike me as more sadistic, and Lilith's nano's as more protective (but not in a sympathetic sort of way - the 'queen of the world' part gave me this impression) and concerned with self-preservation like all the Krusnik nanomachines (the 'you (we) will never die' is a dead give away).
I'm so glad you're writing one for all the Krusniks. I can't to read the others! Squee!
Kadiou
PS: to lazy to log-in right now.