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7/21/2013 c33 Guest
Great chapter like always. I can't wait for the next one and I can't wait to learn more about Alice's backstory. Don't feel dumb about the Jona and the whale thing. If u hadn't mentioned it I would have never realized it myself.
7/21/2013 c33 5Adz 99
I've never got that pun. Make sure to look out for tiny errors. Great chapter. Bye!
7/15/2013 c32 Ninja Addy
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Good chapter. Alice is funny. Just watch out for mistakes. Confusedly should be confused I think. Sorrt foe typos. Doing this on phone and ketboard is tiny.
7/1/2013 c10 3FlowerBlooms
Awesome story so far! :D I like your character Alice she's very interesting and I like your other fan characters as well :)
6/30/2013 c31 5Adz 99
Good chapter. The mayor is a poo-brain
6/30/2013 c30 Adz 99
Weird. Yet good. The what tribe? Xx
6/30/2013 c2 3FlowerBlooms
Great start to the story. :)
6/25/2013 c12 2Noma9
Alice's escape from the rope leash was just the greatest thing.
6/16/2013 c29 5Adz 99
Cool. Marine is a paladin.
You need a capital on "well how should I know
6/10/2013 c28 Adz 99
Yay! New chapter! Great story. Alice overcame her disability! Woohoo. Good day. Glad about your game. Enjoy.
One point:
It's "every soul"
Not "even soul"
5/19/2013 c27 Adz 99
Hi. Bit dissapointed in this chapter. It was a little bit dull. Hope Lice will survive the next battle. Bye.
5/18/2013 c4 11WaddlesThePenguin
Good chapter. Alice is really cute
5/10/2013 c26 5Adz 99
Yay. I was mentioned. Well done for a 5000 word chapter! Great as always. Who the hell were the dragon people? They were weird. Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/5/2013 c25 Adz 99
Cool. Alice can't use her left side!? That'll be awkward. Update soon please. I love this story!
4/28/2013 c24 Adz 99
Cool. Bit short. Alice's really creepy now. Celestrian ripped her soul in two? Kinda mean. Can't wait for the next chapter, PS. Great story is Celestial Secrets by Onesiepenguin
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