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4/23/2013 c2 96Ohfortheloveofpete
Now we can get to the action...
4/23/2013 c1 Ohfortheloveofpete
I wonder if she screamed like Goofy when she fell over the ledge.
4/21/2013 c23 Ninja Addy
Cool. Still good. Haven't logged in. Can't wait for the next chapter. Bye! P.S. I think that HER may be Serena.
4/18/2013 c22 Silverwing123
Ooooooh! I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/14/2013 c22 5Adz 99
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next. Alice is getting kinda creepy.
4/9/2013 c1 Syrup
Hi it's a great story but there's some mistakes, also, why are Alice's wings black and why is everyone scared of her?
4/1/2013 c21 Silverwing123
Poor Catarrhina... When I finished reading this chapter I felt tears in my eyes. Anyway, update soon please!
3/31/2013 c21 Adz 99
Alice seems to be getting creepy. That adds to the intresting-ness (is that a word?). Bye!
3/29/2013 c19 Adz 99
Original character of Arthur I created 2/3 reviews ago should maybe be a Mage instead.
3/29/2013 c17 Adz 99
Got 2 original characters.
Oliver - Ranger - Bow - Brown Hair - Green Eyes - Mature, Sensible, yet Fun - Like a big bro to Alice - Age 19
Arthur - Theif - Knife - Blonde Hair - Purple Eyes - Like Alice only non-celestrian - see supernatural - Age 7
Sorry, dunno how much description you wanted so just gave tons. Bye!
3/27/2013 c2 Adz 99
Good so far. Is it just going to be a re-write of DQ9? That'd be boring. Also, Alice may be small but she couldn't ride a dog! She'd have to be the size of a three year old max!
3/24/2013 c20 Silverwing123
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! Please update soon!
2/21/2013 c15 12Mage of Hope
I like this fic! Only wish that there were at least one or two male teammates joining.
2/19/2013 c15 ReaperNunnally
Abella: Why on earth is this fic not very popular? It's fantastic, I say!
1/13/2013 c7 Zrye13
lol great chapter :)
sorry I haven't reviewed in a while :P
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