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7/30/2017 c1 botlecap
Clever. Joan, as in Joan of Ark. The woman who fought in a war and make a name for herself only to be burned at the stake. Very clever.
10/9/2015 c31 12TheWordMasterofFiction
So, this is the third time I've read this fic (to be fair, I honestly forgot I read it months before until I reread it again on Tuesday...and again today), and every time I read it, I love it. This is one of, if not the best, fem!Pyro fics I've read (and the best SniperxPyro fic I've come across), and I've been through every Fem!Pyro and PyroxSniper fic on FF and AO3. Seriously, it's great stuff. You bring new dynamics to each character's backstories, while still managing to keep their in-game personalities in perspective. When I read TF2 fanfics, I try to read each character's lines in their respective accent, to see if the wording fits the character- yours certainly does. The dialogue isn't chummy or over the top, and everything they say feels like realistic conversation. I wish you had done a little more with Scout's prophetic dreams- perhaps tying them in to Pyro's visions?- because those were some of my favorite portions of this fic. My only criticism would be that the ending felt very rushed, but that could be due to the fact that I've read this fic so many times that the ending sort of gets blurry for me. All in all, this is a great fanfiction for a series with underrated fics, and I hope you're proud of your accomplishment! Great job!
6/30/2015 c14 12Jay Rowan
Aw man, this is the saddest thing I can think of ;~;
Poor Medic
4/11/2015 c31 2El Fisto
Damn this story was fun to read.
12/3/2014 c31 2Analyn Rockwand
AWESOME.
12/1/2014 c26 Analyn Rockwand
OMG. That was BEAUTIFUL.
12/1/2014 c23 Analyn Rockwand
Oh. My. Flaming. God. THAT WAS AWESOME! I CAN"T STOP SMILING! FATHER-DAUGHTER FTW!
12/1/2014 c19 Analyn Rockwand
"Would you like me to treat zhat burn?" Fucking PERFECT!
10/10/2014 c31 4Fairyhaven13
I loved this. I mean, it was slightly more emotional than I'm used to for short scenes, but understandable. And it's very nice to see a fic for once where the Scout's not a TOTAL complete jerk. He's all nice and stuff (with a big head) towards the end. D You did a great job!
9/16/2014 c31 The Silent song
I just wanted to let you know this is the best fem!pyro portrayal and fic i have ever read and there are quite a few fem!pyro fics out there. I loved every minute of this and I was so relieved to find out it wasn't going to be some sappy romance fic. I loved the humor and your take on the classes is great and the end of this fic really made me smile. Reading a good book, short story, or a fic always makes me feel some sort of emotion and this gave me chills, and made me smile. I couldn't stop reading until I was done! With that I just want to say that you did an outstanding job and I would love to read more from you in the future! (If you write more tf2 fics that is. It's totally up to you)
5/25/2014 c27 1Mitsuki Shigamatsu
One for sorrow...
5/25/2014 c12 Mitsuki Shigamatsu
'Work makes you Free', so Medic was at Auswitz (sorry if I misspelled it).
4/4/2014 c31 1Dracona Mortis
I... Don't... Can't...
Yes... Yes...
YES!
JAWOHL!
2/11/2014 c31 7ShadowX116
Wat? No epilogue?
Haha, oh well.
Loved the story tho! Here is a cookie, and have a wonderful day! :D

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12/16/2013 c31 2IcestormTundra
ah the good old fashioned feminist fanfics, always a good read even if I don't believe in any of it myself
Pyro was interesting in this, not just another Mary-Sue or disfigured man, and I like how you brought both Medic and sniper into it with a little backstory, not many authors do that with TF2 )

all in all very good story, and keep up the good writing amico 3
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