for Who Knew9/3/2020 c3 TeenageCrisis
Haven't read this before but def looking forward to some good old itasaku..
Haven't read this before but def looking forward to some good old itasaku..
8/4/2020 c2 Rrele
Holy shit! I love it ! Wow what an amazing start! The idea is so wild and different I just loooiove it please continue being awesome
Holy shit! I love it ! Wow what an amazing start! The idea is so wild and different I just loooiove it please continue being awesome
5/8/2020 c1 Shelly Isra
Story sounded interesting but i am guessing the rewrite is never happening since its been several years
Story sounded interesting but i am guessing the rewrite is never happening since its been several years
12/27/2016 c1 Guest
I wonder what would of happened if Madara had gotten Sakura from the closet
I wonder what would of happened if Madara had gotten Sakura from the closet
11/25/2016 c11 Guest
AAWWWWEEEEEEEE
AAWWWWEEEEEEEE
3/23/2014 c4 
6Bleuboo2013
So as a writer myself, and reading so far, I have noticed that while you are writing the POV's you tend to switch between the 'I' and 'he' during Satoshi's POV. Just wanted to bring it to your attention that you were doing that. Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying the story thus far. I'm not certain if you meant to do that, but thought I'd mention it.
6Bleuboo2013So as a writer myself, and reading so far, I have noticed that while you are writing the POV's you tend to switch between the 'I' and 'he' during Satoshi's POV. Just wanted to bring it to your attention that you were doing that. Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying the story thus far. I'm not certain if you meant to do that, but thought I'd mention it.
8/25/2013 c11 3Karatekid-Ninja
I wish the story went more into ita-kun and Saku-chan's relationship, but it was an amazing story and really well written, the basic plot was great and not one that is over used, you wrote the cutting scenes so realistic and described it in such detail, i felt like i was sakuras character. Brilliant story :)
3Karatekid-NinjaI wish the story went more into ita-kun and Saku-chan's relationship, but it was an amazing story and really well written, the basic plot was great and not one that is over used, you wrote the cutting scenes so realistic and described it in such detail, i felt like i was sakuras character. Brilliant story :)