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1I-Love-Trunks1
Aw, poor Yoite. That was sad. It's good that Miharu was there for him. I really like this story!
1I-Love-Trunks1Aw, poor Yoite. That was sad. It's good that Miharu was there for him. I really like this story!
12/9/2012 c1 Deleted Nick
This was your first fiction that I read, but I'm commenting after because I liked too.
In fact, even I wanted to comment because I know that I can do it properly, but in the end I wanted to at least write that I find this really amazing.
A perfect introspection if Yoite, which transmits both anger and sadness
It's not righteous the life that he lived, if at least after escaping from their parents he had found a good person ... but no _
Yukimi yes, of course, but before there was Hattori who manipulated him to learn Kira, sending him to die.
Then the image that you have set as an icon of fiction is the coup de grace, that scene is where Yoite fragile shows for the first time and I've always adored it.
This was your first fiction that I read, but I'm commenting after because I liked too.
In fact, even I wanted to comment because I know that I can do it properly, but in the end I wanted to at least write that I find this really amazing.
A perfect introspection if Yoite, which transmits both anger and sadness
It's not righteous the life that he lived, if at least after escaping from their parents he had found a good person ... but no _
Yukimi yes, of course, but before there was Hattori who manipulated him to learn Kira, sending him to die.
Then the image that you have set as an icon of fiction is the coup de grace, that scene is where Yoite fragile shows for the first time and I've always adored it.
11/27/2012 c1 14ShirouChan13
That... was just like... awesome. I have no other real words to describe it. It wasn't repetitive, and everything was where it was supposed to be in regards to like the flow of events and such. Fantastic job :D *hugs*
Shirou
14ShirouChan13That... was just like... awesome. I have no other real words to describe it. It wasn't repetitive, and everything was where it was supposed to be in regards to like the flow of events and such. Fantastic job :D *hugs*
Shirou
11/26/2012 c1 nobody
this almost made me cry it was sad then yukimi came in and miharu it was still sad but less somehow if he would let me i would give him a huge hug then he would probably kill me with kira but still. Loved your story
this almost made me cry it was sad then yukimi came in and miharu it was still sad but less somehow if he would let me i would give him a huge hug then he would probably kill me with kira but still. Loved your story