
3/26/2014 c7
1shayna.kasdan
okay. I signed the petition like 3 months ago. Please write now! I am dying to find out what else happens!

okay. I signed the petition like 3 months ago. Please write now! I am dying to find out what else happens!
3/14/2014 c7
1269AnimeFreak69
okay i signed it but... WHAST WHAT WHAT WHAT THE OH MY GOD HOW THE FUCK AM I GONNA GO ON LIVING IF THIS HAPPENS MY WHOLE LIFE IS ABOUT FANFICTIONS FAN ART FAN MADE VIDEOS AND WHO KNOWS WHAT ELSE NO NO NO PEOPLE HURRY SING THAT THING THIS CANNOT HAPPEN!

okay i signed it but... WHAST WHAT WHAT WHAT THE OH MY GOD HOW THE FUCK AM I GONNA GO ON LIVING IF THIS HAPPENS MY WHOLE LIFE IS ABOUT FANFICTIONS FAN ART FAN MADE VIDEOS AND WHO KNOWS WHAT ELSE NO NO NO PEOPLE HURRY SING THAT THING THIS CANNOT HAPPEN!
1/11/2014 c6 69AnimeFreak69
this story is just awesome! When will we get yo see more of Leah and Cal's relationship? And to put it bluntly will they have sex ?
this story is just awesome! When will we get yo see more of Leah and Cal's relationship? And to put it bluntly will they have sex ?
10/19/2013 c6 KingKeAndrez
okay let's all be honest i absolutely love this chapter! also the chapters before that you are a wonderful such a wonderful writer and I love how your writing gets all emotional and then it just turns like nothing stays the same or is it will everything does stay the same but you know is not neutral not bored. And i love that keep it up!
okay let's all be honest i absolutely love this chapter! also the chapters before that you are a wonderful such a wonderful writer and I love how your writing gets all emotional and then it just turns like nothing stays the same or is it will everything does stay the same but you know is not neutral not bored. And i love that keep it up!
9/15/2013 c6 Ninjarotte
"I shall ask Ninjarotte to put her kick boxing skills to use, on you." Oo yeah baby that's what im talking about xD ! I can't wait to read this chapter, for once im the one which made you wait ;p Thank Cat, you are a genius, but you know i'll kick her anytime anywhere for free, no need to wait, in fact i'm going to do it next time i see you ! And you'll have to wear MY scarf héhéhé...im not done with you ! Beware !
"...of an eight feet deep whole and it was impassible for her to climb up" impassible ? Oo is it because the rocks stared at her with no expression that she do not dare to climb ? Impossible ! xD
"Well, my love, trying to avoid me? Me, your mate? OH MY GODNESS ROLLING IN THE DUST OF THE FUCKING SATAN'S BBQ PARTY ! I love it ! So cruel xD she's naked and he is so pervert Wow ! If i was her i'd throw him a rock ( yes yes it's too high blablabla, but even i'd made her try and got hit by her own rock xD and he would laught so hard that he would eventually fall to in the whole mouahahaha, and it will be her turn to laught and make fun of him, and then everything would collapse and they will be stucked body to body without moving and deeply attracted to each other after yelling at each other face !
" a net, carried by the helicopter snatched her and carried her away" Noooo you didn't ! i love you so much right now that i might no kick you next time ( just might, i want to see the reste before xD) All my dreams come true because of you ) thank, i'm going to shade a tear
"and fell down a chimney. " ... I didn't know Santa Claus was a nacked women... but i love this version of fact ! Christmas 2.0 !
"Biiiiiiiiiip." i would have put mine there, something like " Hey ! Welcome to my new game ! The rule is simple ! The first to hung up win ! You're ready ? Go !
"without a single drop of water or rain." A year without you is like a year without raaaaaiiiiiinnn , héhé selena was there no ? I hoped she might have lost herself in the desert xD
"and all the pack guys" Abdos packs ? I want sixof them ! You have a week, not a day more ! So you better star working out
"I didn't get them because of a lame electrocution" THANK YOU ! THAT SUCH A RELIAF !
"You forget that once a guardian, always a guardian. You were born a guardian, Ai, like the rest of us, don't forget it." It's remind me of every conversation between a gay and his friends or family xD, im gay ! i was born this way i can't escape ! huhu
"Ai? Aiyana, Honey?" you traitor xD i bet you didn't explain a damn thing i'm i right ? More suspens, i like it, but Cat must be sooooo mad at you xD
"While some of the pack were glaring" Sorry i can't help it, im vizualizating ( don't know the right word but i assuming you'll get it ) a pack of abds looking at the door xD miam
"with the accursed frying pan." FRYING PAN ?! You did it xD your story is one of the best ! I love frying pan, in a battle your best bro is a frying pan !
"What the hell!" xD MAGIC !
"well he's a fairy" A fairy ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... AWESOME !
"from you and your hurtful reaction" Hurtful reaction ? xD he is the one that got punch with a frying pan no ?
"well tough shit!"" I LOVE HIM ! xD so bad boy and horrible
" I should have hit him in his balls, just so that he remembers me each and every time he seats or walks! " MOUAHAHAHA awsome, so bitchy !
"I shall torture him, before giving him a slow and extremely painful death!" ... that's not scary at all...
"Revenge is not healthy, after all, all that it brings is war, and thus it brings pain and death! Do you understand?"" Bullshit ! Revenge is goooooooood è_é
(' • ·٠• Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ •٠· • ') it's really beautifyl, keep doing this )
"he never wanted to take his hand away from them" that's not cute, it's scary ! Il va la scalper !
"the way she blushed and moaned when he pleased or teased her." Way better )
"Then he roughly landed on … on top of Cale!" So hot, but ...DONT TUCH HIM !
"And people, this blue button has a purpose: REVIEW!" héhé lova ya , don't change.
I loved thus chapter, it was really funny ( for me i don't know if i was suppose to laught at them but still xD i love the way you right) I didn't see many mistakes so congratulation ! And you put MY SCENE ! THANK YOU SO MUCH? i pictured it very well ! Even if i was tired this made me feel way better so thank and keep righting even in prepa or i shall kick you ! I loved this chapter so i will spare you this time Bravo ! I also loved the explanation of fairy stuff, kind of bitchy so i liked it of course Congrat's !
"I shall ask Ninjarotte to put her kick boxing skills to use, on you." Oo yeah baby that's what im talking about xD ! I can't wait to read this chapter, for once im the one which made you wait ;p Thank Cat, you are a genius, but you know i'll kick her anytime anywhere for free, no need to wait, in fact i'm going to do it next time i see you ! And you'll have to wear MY scarf héhéhé...im not done with you ! Beware !
"...of an eight feet deep whole and it was impassible for her to climb up" impassible ? Oo is it because the rocks stared at her with no expression that she do not dare to climb ? Impossible ! xD
"Well, my love, trying to avoid me? Me, your mate? OH MY GODNESS ROLLING IN THE DUST OF THE FUCKING SATAN'S BBQ PARTY ! I love it ! So cruel xD she's naked and he is so pervert Wow ! If i was her i'd throw him a rock ( yes yes it's too high blablabla, but even i'd made her try and got hit by her own rock xD and he would laught so hard that he would eventually fall to in the whole mouahahaha, and it will be her turn to laught and make fun of him, and then everything would collapse and they will be stucked body to body without moving and deeply attracted to each other after yelling at each other face !
" a net, carried by the helicopter snatched her and carried her away" Noooo you didn't ! i love you so much right now that i might no kick you next time ( just might, i want to see the reste before xD) All my dreams come true because of you ) thank, i'm going to shade a tear
"and fell down a chimney. " ... I didn't know Santa Claus was a nacked women... but i love this version of fact ! Christmas 2.0 !
"Biiiiiiiiiip." i would have put mine there, something like " Hey ! Welcome to my new game ! The rule is simple ! The first to hung up win ! You're ready ? Go !
"without a single drop of water or rain." A year without you is like a year without raaaaaiiiiiinnn , héhé selena was there no ? I hoped she might have lost herself in the desert xD
"and all the pack guys" Abdos packs ? I want sixof them ! You have a week, not a day more ! So you better star working out
"I didn't get them because of a lame electrocution" THANK YOU ! THAT SUCH A RELIAF !
"You forget that once a guardian, always a guardian. You were born a guardian, Ai, like the rest of us, don't forget it." It's remind me of every conversation between a gay and his friends or family xD, im gay ! i was born this way i can't escape ! huhu
"Ai? Aiyana, Honey?" you traitor xD i bet you didn't explain a damn thing i'm i right ? More suspens, i like it, but Cat must be sooooo mad at you xD
"While some of the pack were glaring" Sorry i can't help it, im vizualizating ( don't know the right word but i assuming you'll get it ) a pack of abds looking at the door xD miam
"with the accursed frying pan." FRYING PAN ?! You did it xD your story is one of the best ! I love frying pan, in a battle your best bro is a frying pan !
"What the hell!" xD MAGIC !
"well he's a fairy" A fairy ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... AWESOME !
"from you and your hurtful reaction" Hurtful reaction ? xD he is the one that got punch with a frying pan no ?
"well tough shit!"" I LOVE HIM ! xD so bad boy and horrible
" I should have hit him in his balls, just so that he remembers me each and every time he seats or walks! " MOUAHAHAHA awsome, so bitchy !
"I shall torture him, before giving him a slow and extremely painful death!" ... that's not scary at all...
"Revenge is not healthy, after all, all that it brings is war, and thus it brings pain and death! Do you understand?"" Bullshit ! Revenge is goooooooood è_é
(' • ·٠• Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ •٠· • ') it's really beautifyl, keep doing this )
"he never wanted to take his hand away from them" that's not cute, it's scary ! Il va la scalper !
"the way she blushed and moaned when he pleased or teased her." Way better )
"Then he roughly landed on … on top of Cale!" So hot, but ...DONT TUCH HIM !
"And people, this blue button has a purpose: REVIEW!" héhé lova ya , don't change.
I loved thus chapter, it was really funny ( for me i don't know if i was suppose to laught at them but still xD i love the way you right) I didn't see many mistakes so congratulation ! And you put MY SCENE ! THANK YOU SO MUCH? i pictured it very well ! Even if i was tired this made me feel way better so thank and keep righting even in prepa or i shall kick you ! I loved this chapter so i will spare you this time Bravo ! I also loved the explanation of fairy stuff, kind of bitchy so i liked it of course Congrat's !
9/8/2013 c6 VampireLover 1
AWSOME STORY AND I JUST LOVE THE DRESS!PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. (-:
AWSOME STORY AND I JUST LOVE THE DRESS!PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. (-:
9/8/2013 c6 cew1088
Great chapter. I hope they work everything. It was so funny when Bella got slapped.
Great chapter. I hope they work everything. It was so funny when Bella got slapped.
9/8/2013 c6 Kitten
Ok... well i'm not totally upset...just by the end but I will talk about that after...è.é
So, I really like this chapter! The explaination of the guardians is amazing, you really have an incredible imagination! And i'm really impressed! The moment when Ai' talk with her grandmother is really really funny x) And even when she hit Jacob hihihi Oh and I love the message of his phone I don't know how we say that in english :$ x)
But the end...WHYYYY whyyyy do you love torturate mee ! Can't you just pursue a little bit! Just a little, just the dialogue between Jacob and Ai'! And I'm sure we won't have a new chapter after yet...isn't it ? *dark kitten*
However, Thanks for this chapter, it was really nice to read you again! You're still amazing!
Good luck for this school year! Work hard ;)
Kitten
Ok... well i'm not totally upset...just by the end but I will talk about that after...è.é
So, I really like this chapter! The explaination of the guardians is amazing, you really have an incredible imagination! And i'm really impressed! The moment when Ai' talk with her grandmother is really really funny x) And even when she hit Jacob hihihi Oh and I love the message of his phone I don't know how we say that in english :$ x)
But the end...WHYYYY whyyyy do you love torturate mee ! Can't you just pursue a little bit! Just a little, just the dialogue between Jacob and Ai'! And I'm sure we won't have a new chapter after yet...isn't it ? *dark kitten*
However, Thanks for this chapter, it was really nice to read you again! You're still amazing!
Good luck for this school year! Work hard ;)
Kitten
4/21/2013 c5 Kitten
Love love love! I loveee your story !
BUT...I hate you :pp you are so cruel ! How can you stop like that !
I want to know who is Cassie, and how did Ai' get her power! Like Cal !
Oh by the way, I love Cal, he is really funny and confident x) The moment with Léah was so funny x) But for a second I thought that he really was a vampire :S
Jacob...a little bit jealous no ? hihihi
Ai' and Stacey , great as always.
Really nice chapter...
but PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE TELL ME what is the history of the guards ! Pleaaase pleease pleeease *cutie eyes * *kitten eyes* :P:P
I waant the next chapter *crying, yelliing *
:p
Love love love! I loveee your story !
BUT...I hate you :pp you are so cruel ! How can you stop like that !
I want to know who is Cassie, and how did Ai' get her power! Like Cal !
Oh by the way, I love Cal, he is really funny and confident x) The moment with Léah was so funny x) But for a second I thought that he really was a vampire :S
Jacob...a little bit jealous no ? hihihi
Ai' and Stacey , great as always.
Really nice chapter...
but PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE TELL ME what is the history of the guards ! Pleaaase pleease pleeease *cutie eyes * *kitten eyes* :P:P
I waant the next chapter *crying, yelliing *
:p
4/10/2013 c5 Ninjarotte
"Yes, love?" xD it's kind of like the lord of the ring ! "Yes my love ?" Oh my prrrrecious fan fic...
"I love you two, my big bad wolf!" You TWO ? I Knew it ! he is Schizophrenic ! IT'S GOLLUM !, yes my love... So let's sum up a bit your story : we have our own electric power company alias EPC and her best friend is godzilla with want to eat her BF , plus, now the first one is in love with a psychotic gollum guy like ! incredible, what a imagination ) let's continue...
"Girl, if you and Jake could kiss through phone call, or even touch through phone calls, I think that you'd be having sex, without a second thought." OOOOOOOH ! what a GREAT idea ! i want the same one, wait by the phone HELL BE I'M CALLING !
'slapping-Cal-day' oh yeah baby !
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT ? My dear and lovely Cal already imprint ?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo bouhouhouhouhouhouhouhouhouh, where is my lover boy ? The free and sexy wild one ? The one in my hotest dreams ? Argh, what did you do ? He'll never be the same again snif...
Ohohoh i feel the sexy scene is coming soon...
YES ! Gotcha ! Yahooo "Each time she did, I pushed my body closer to hers" agrrrrou P
"Cat, you're it!" ? it what does it means ? And Cat ? XD Mweou !
"What the hell got to her?' " well let me guess...maybe you tried to rape her ? X) so naive
"I am not a blood sucker" noop, your a sex machine, a love stealer, a twix snaper, a pool drainer, a leef bloower... but definitly not a blood sucker ! Because Sucks and Cal cannot be in the same phrase !
"Let's start with my powers... I didn't get them because of a lame electrocution, " OUF ! i'm so relieved you have no idea
"but because I was born with them." snif, you didn't add my fantastic and crazy theories ? to bad for you ...
"You see, I'm a guardian. In other words I'm a fan fic kidnapper ! How dare you stop like that ?! What you gonna take tomorow...niark niark niark, you'll regret it !
Well, i'm very happy ) this chap was beyond all my expectation, congratulation )
I can't wait for the rest of it Oo And CAL ! Wait for me ! i'm gonna de-imprint you ! Even if i have to kill this kitty ! I'm going to set you free of this madness and make you come into mine !
For the next chap, i want Leah to fall in a hole and get trap mouéhéhéhéhé bye bye )
"Yes, love?" xD it's kind of like the lord of the ring ! "Yes my love ?" Oh my prrrrecious fan fic...
"I love you two, my big bad wolf!" You TWO ? I Knew it ! he is Schizophrenic ! IT'S GOLLUM !, yes my love... So let's sum up a bit your story : we have our own electric power company alias EPC and her best friend is godzilla with want to eat her BF , plus, now the first one is in love with a psychotic gollum guy like ! incredible, what a imagination ) let's continue...
"Girl, if you and Jake could kiss through phone call, or even touch through phone calls, I think that you'd be having sex, without a second thought." OOOOOOOH ! what a GREAT idea ! i want the same one, wait by the phone HELL BE I'M CALLING !
'slapping-Cal-day' oh yeah baby !
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT ? My dear and lovely Cal already imprint ?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo bouhouhouhouhouhouhouhouhouh, where is my lover boy ? The free and sexy wild one ? The one in my hotest dreams ? Argh, what did you do ? He'll never be the same again snif...
Ohohoh i feel the sexy scene is coming soon...
YES ! Gotcha ! Yahooo "Each time she did, I pushed my body closer to hers" agrrrrou P
"Cat, you're it!" ? it what does it means ? And Cat ? XD Mweou !
"What the hell got to her?' " well let me guess...maybe you tried to rape her ? X) so naive
"I am not a blood sucker" noop, your a sex machine, a love stealer, a twix snaper, a pool drainer, a leef bloower... but definitly not a blood sucker ! Because Sucks and Cal cannot be in the same phrase !
"Let's start with my powers... I didn't get them because of a lame electrocution, " OUF ! i'm so relieved you have no idea
"but because I was born with them." snif, you didn't add my fantastic and crazy theories ? to bad for you ...
"You see, I'm a guardian. In other words I'm a fan fic kidnapper ! How dare you stop like that ?! What you gonna take tomorow...niark niark niark, you'll regret it !
Well, i'm very happy ) this chap was beyond all my expectation, congratulation )
I can't wait for the rest of it Oo And CAL ! Wait for me ! i'm gonna de-imprint you ! Even if i have to kill this kitty ! I'm going to set you free of this madness and make you come into mine !
For the next chap, i want Leah to fall in a hole and get trap mouéhéhéhéhé bye bye )