
7/23/2013 c1
1Cecelia Dowdy
Whom are we reading about? You don't mention names? At first I thought it was Rose and Jack, but, when you wrote: even after her father had jumped and her mother had gotten on the lifeboat
I figured it could not be Rose since her father is dead (at least he's dead in the movie)
Otherwise, it was an okay chapter.

Whom are we reading about? You don't mention names? At first I thought it was Rose and Jack, but, when you wrote: even after her father had jumped and her mother had gotten on the lifeboat
I figured it could not be Rose since her father is dead (at least he's dead in the movie)
Otherwise, it was an okay chapter.