for Children with White Carpet5/7/2016 c1 Pepper'sRival
Great action in this, moves along at a suspenseful pace and you feel like you're watching the scene unfold from somewhere in the room. You get a real feel for everyone's emotions too, amazing how you fit so much detail into not that long of a story. Nicely done :-)
Great action in this, moves along at a suspenseful pace and you feel like you're watching the scene unfold from somewhere in the room. You get a real feel for everyone's emotions too, amazing how you fit so much detail into not that long of a story. Nicely done :-)
5/15/2013 c1 
3FledgelingInk
I feel all fuzzy :) You have no idea how happy this made me (especially the Thor LOTR bit, I almost died).
3FledgelingInkI feel all fuzzy :) You have no idea how happy this made me (especially the Thor LOTR bit, I almost died).
11/28/2012 c1 Havocthekitty
I really enjoyed this story, especially Tony. He's very protective of anyone he considers his family. He would be even more protective of his child.
I really enjoyed this story, especially Tony. He's very protective of anyone he considers his family. He would be even more protective of his child.
11/28/2012 c1 Amy
Great job on this, wow. Talk about intense. The woman was a nut, the team was doing their thing and then Tony just snaps. Now breaking protocol should be bad, but I was silently cheering 'Yes! Go Tony!' lol, so I can't say much. :P I loved his hero move and gosh did I just wanna hug him when he was so protective of the kid. He saw Pepper, but more over, it could easily have been his own child. Whole different side of him you captured there. Plus a bit of concerned team mates, which is always good. :)
Great job on this, wow. Talk about intense. The woman was a nut, the team was doing their thing and then Tony just snaps. Now breaking protocol should be bad, but I was silently cheering 'Yes! Go Tony!' lol, so I can't say much. :P I loved his hero move and gosh did I just wanna hug him when he was so protective of the kid. He saw Pepper, but more over, it could easily have been his own child. Whole different side of him you captured there. Plus a bit of concerned team mates, which is always good. :)