11/29/2012 c1 4The Magnetic Witch
Neat-o, you could make this into a sort-of Drabble!

11/29/2012 c1 Echo
One-shot? :( I'd like more. But am happy with what I've got. My vote is to continue the story. Great job!

11/28/2012 c1 tevlek
Good job. I liked your descriptions and the wind being jack's only friend back then feels like sad truth.