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10/14/2019 c1 1wtdrmfrthwbzn
this is excellent
11/21/2014 c1 68Lilly Winters
How does this not have any reviews? I think it's the summary because, if I may be so blunt, it didn't give enough information. To be honest, I read the story because I saw that it had no reviews and no story should go review-less, plus I wanted to see what the heck it had to do with a dog and a rabbit. I'm not quite certain why Vincent was a dog and Yuffie a rabbit, but the POV that you used was a nice change from the typical 1st and 3rd person POV. The writing was smooth and thoughtful. Everyone was in-character. You put two characters in a situation where they are allowed to act as they normally would not, all for the sake of their comrade :) (i.e. Vincent pulling her against his chest in order to warm her). There were no obvious spelling/grammar issues, either. The only parts I could recommend changing are the summary and explaining the meaning behind the Dog and Rabbit symbolism. I would most definitely like to see more pieces like this.

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