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8ChillifyVilify
Quick question: Is Gohan's growth ever going to stagnate? I mean, seriously, it's hard to fight when you're old and decrepit, right? Also, notice my PM :(
8ChillifyVilifyQuick question: Is Gohan's growth ever going to stagnate? I mean, seriously, it's hard to fight when you're old and decrepit, right? Also, notice my PM :(
1/24/2017 c6 DBZ GIRL 1
LOVED IT. ;D
LOVED IT. ;D
9/15/2015 c6 Guest
Can you make a ZAT crossover with another series?
Can you make a ZAT crossover with another series?
5/28/2015 c6 TeenGohanLover
I have read your Immortal Saiyan, and this one and I LOVE THEM! I cant wait for the next installment! I love your style. and Gohan :) your writing is amazing! its well balanced. i cry, laugh, get mad cause of your cliff hangers and i only get to use the internet once a week. i really cant wait for next series, keep up the good work!
I have read your Immortal Saiyan, and this one and I LOVE THEM! I cant wait for the next installment! I love your style. and Gohan :) your writing is amazing! its well balanced. i cry, laugh, get mad cause of your cliff hangers and i only get to use the internet once a week. i really cant wait for next series, keep up the good work!
5/10/2015 c6 5CrimsonWild
I was very much reminded of the Doctor Who Christmas Special when I started to read this and it became clear that you were using the reference when you used that lovely song by Katherine Jenkins in this story. Lovely work.
Is there going to be any more in this series?
LG xxx
5CrimsonWildI was very much reminded of the Doctor Who Christmas Special when I started to read this and it became clear that you were using the reference when you used that lovely song by Katherine Jenkins in this story. Lovely work.
Is there going to be any more in this series?
LG xxx
1/1/2015 c6 Guest
Ok I have to ask, on chap. 5 was that a Teamfourstar reference?
And another thing, I know you might receive ZAT ideas a lot but I thought of this one time. When Gohan defeated Ru in The Immortal Saiyan, Ru said if he had the chance he would like to be like Gohan (or something like that). Well what if some super powerful being, like a harmony or something close to that, showed up, and Gohan and Ru could team up and fight the bad guy. Even go far to make Gohan and Ru a harmony, Gohan's pureness and Ru's newfound goodness can stop them from becoming evil with power.
Just an idea, but you have to admit that a pretty good damn idea ;D
Ok I have to ask, on chap. 5 was that a Teamfourstar reference?
And another thing, I know you might receive ZAT ideas a lot but I thought of this one time. When Gohan defeated Ru in The Immortal Saiyan, Ru said if he had the chance he would like to be like Gohan (or something like that). Well what if some super powerful being, like a harmony or something close to that, showed up, and Gohan and Ru could team up and fight the bad guy. Even go far to make Gohan and Ru a harmony, Gohan's pureness and Ru's newfound goodness can stop them from becoming evil with power.
Just an idea, but you have to admit that a pretty good damn idea ;D
7/24/2014 c6 Guest
I love it so much! Can't wait to see the next story! I hope in the next story gohan gets to be 13! or 12! I want him to grow but in the age he fought cell in it my favorite stage. You know what would be awesome if gohan took goten to some ghost town or haunted house ( Halloween is AWESOME ). But it's up to you. I just hope you hear my review.
I love it so much! Can't wait to see the next story! I hope in the next story gohan gets to be 13! or 12! I want him to grow but in the age he fought cell in it my favorite stage. You know what would be awesome if gohan took goten to some ghost town or haunted house ( Halloween is AWESOME ). But it's up to you. I just hope you hear my review.
6/13/2014 c6 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER
This was a good filler leading up to your next installment of ZAT.
It was cool seeing Gohan rediscover his youth. Nice touch at the end with him getting what he desired.
I look forward to your next ZAT installment.
This was a good filler leading up to your next installment of ZAT.
It was cool seeing Gohan rediscover his youth. Nice touch at the end with him getting what he desired.
I look forward to your next ZAT installment.
1/31/2014 c6 Guest
I can't believe it has already been almost a year since this was completed! It just shows you that great stories like this will never leave us who have read it, thank you for everything!
I can't believe it has already been almost a year since this was completed! It just shows you that great stories like this will never leave us who have read it, thank you for everything!
7/16/2013 c6 85X59
This was a pretty interesting holiday special for ZAT. Over all I liked the whole thing from Goku and Vegeta arguing over who would defend the earth to Gohan finding himself growing, while being an immortal child. Though I will admit that I just loved the scene where Goku and Vegeta where arguing and Gohan just came in and stopped the Earth from being destroyed. The way both Goku and Vegeta were in that "It's my turn next time" mindset was hilarious.
However I thought that Icival was rather cruel. Granted the guy was an asshole and evil, but the infinite darkness seems too much for the guy. At the same time seeing Gohan reaching such a dark place was fascinating, as it proves despite his maturity he can still be influenced by his my darker desires.
When it comes to it, I think it would be better for the Sovereign (Gohan included) to make vague references to other fandoms. That way we get a glimpse of different missions they've been on in the main series and you could have noodle incidents in your story. That way the focus is on the DBZ (mainly Gohan) and allows you to have fun seeing how many people can figure out what fandom is being referred to.
To be perfectly honest I can't help but wonder if Bulma looking into dimensional travel was a sort of continuation hook for ZAT. After all I could see a couple of things coming from.
Option A.) Bulma plays around with dimensional travel and unleashes an evil that was meant to be contained.
Option B.) Bulma accidentally causes damage to dimensions and the dimensions begin to unravel,
Option C.) Bulma ignores Gohan's warning and tests out her dimensional travel. However this in turn causes a series of events that would force the Sovereign and the Z-fighters to fight one another. Throughout all this Gohan finds torn and the story would focus Gohan picking one side over the other. You know this scenario in my future is definitely the most gray-gray mortality.
Option D.) Bulma's dimensional travel research is stolen and that leads to chaos.
For the record having all these options before me, made me realize that if your sequel idea doesn't include Bulma's dimensional research at all, I have no real guess work to choose from on how this series will proceed.
Well I can't wait to see what happens next.
85X59This was a pretty interesting holiday special for ZAT. Over all I liked the whole thing from Goku and Vegeta arguing over who would defend the earth to Gohan finding himself growing, while being an immortal child. Though I will admit that I just loved the scene where Goku and Vegeta where arguing and Gohan just came in and stopped the Earth from being destroyed. The way both Goku and Vegeta were in that "It's my turn next time" mindset was hilarious.
However I thought that Icival was rather cruel. Granted the guy was an asshole and evil, but the infinite darkness seems too much for the guy. At the same time seeing Gohan reaching such a dark place was fascinating, as it proves despite his maturity he can still be influenced by his my darker desires.
When it comes to it, I think it would be better for the Sovereign (Gohan included) to make vague references to other fandoms. That way we get a glimpse of different missions they've been on in the main series and you could have noodle incidents in your story. That way the focus is on the DBZ (mainly Gohan) and allows you to have fun seeing how many people can figure out what fandom is being referred to.
To be perfectly honest I can't help but wonder if Bulma looking into dimensional travel was a sort of continuation hook for ZAT. After all I could see a couple of things coming from.
Option A.) Bulma plays around with dimensional travel and unleashes an evil that was meant to be contained.
Option B.) Bulma accidentally causes damage to dimensions and the dimensions begin to unravel,
Option C.) Bulma ignores Gohan's warning and tests out her dimensional travel. However this in turn causes a series of events that would force the Sovereign and the Z-fighters to fight one another. Throughout all this Gohan finds torn and the story would focus Gohan picking one side over the other. You know this scenario in my future is definitely the most gray-gray mortality.
Option D.) Bulma's dimensional travel research is stolen and that leads to chaos.
For the record having all these options before me, made me realize that if your sequel idea doesn't include Bulma's dimensional research at all, I have no real guess work to choose from on how this series will proceed.
Well I can't wait to see what happens next.
7/5/2013 c6 FlyByReviewer
This story was so awesome! I like to go back and read the ZAT series because they are so inspirational! They always leave me feeling better after reading them, thanks! I nearly cry from joy after both of the conclusions to the first and this holiday special! They are so amazing and I will love to see the next journey of the ZAT stories when it arrives!
This story was so awesome! I like to go back and read the ZAT series because they are so inspirational! They always leave me feeling better after reading them, thanks! I nearly cry from joy after both of the conclusions to the first and this holiday special! They are so amazing and I will love to see the next journey of the ZAT stories when it arrives!
6/22/2013 c6 Guest
Didnt ru have control over his age. If so wouldnt gohan have control over his age too?
Didnt ru have control over his age. If so wouldnt gohan have control over his age too?
5/29/2013 c6 Angel
I love your fics. You r 1 of my 2 favourite writer on fanfic. The other is lucied but i dont know who is first but my favourite is ZAT:immortal saiyan. ;)
I love your fics. You r 1 of my 2 favourite writer on fanfic. The other is lucied but i dont know who is first but my favourite is ZAT:immortal saiyan. ;)
3/6/2013 c6 Guest
I man-teared reading this. Ur the best revu
I man-teared reading this. Ur the best revu