for Young Justice: Breather5/25/2019 c19 Eris
Awesome story. So fascinating. But where is the sequel you talk about?
Awesome story. So fascinating. But where is the sequel you talk about?
4/27/2019 c1 Galva
What Cassie did was really messed up and an unacceptable abuse of her powers
What Cassie did was really messed up and an unacceptable abuse of her powers
4/6/2019 c19 Courtney Elizabeth1
Wow incredible. What is the sequel tho ? None of ur stories are labelled as book 1,2 etc. loveee ur writing. Thanks.
Wow incredible. What is the sequel tho ? None of ur stories are labelled as book 1,2 etc. loveee ur writing. Thanks.
4/5/2019 c14 Courtney Elizabeth1
I love how u write. U have written this so well. Connecting it to the real story. But not retelling. U add more detail. Give us more info. Have a spin on the story. It is fantastic. Thanks
I love how u write. U have written this so well. Connecting it to the real story. But not retelling. U add more detail. Give us more info. Have a spin on the story. It is fantastic. Thanks
7/21/2018 c19 
4You Don't Know Me150
I don’t know how it’s possible… I know this one is an old one, but I don’t know how every story I read you have so far has gotten better and better. I about choked on air in laughter with the drunken Connor and Megan chapter. Brilliant once again!
4You Don't Know Me150I don’t know how it’s possible… I know this one is an old one, but I don’t know how every story I read you have so far has gotten better and better. I about choked on air in laughter with the drunken Connor and Megan chapter. Brilliant once again!
3/3/2017 c2 Noah Hensley
RKO! Lol
RKO! Lol
10/24/2016 c2 V-bird
Awwww Conner comforting Gar _
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He puffed out his cheeks as he placed his hands on the sides of his head and fanned out his fingers.
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XD Great impersonation :D
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ROFL! The groin kick by La'gaan was the stupidest, funniest move. And it barely face conner, he just adjusted himself. ;)
Awwww Conner comforting Gar _
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He puffed out his cheeks as he placed his hands on the sides of his head and fanned out his fingers.
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XD Great impersonation :D
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ROFL! The groin kick by La'gaan was the stupidest, funniest move. And it barely face conner, he just adjusted himself. ;)
10/24/2016 c5 15Vanessa Masters
Huh, the scarab has a point...will Bart cease to exist. If Jaime doesn't stay on mode?
15Vanessa MastersHuh, the scarab has a point...will Bart cease to exist. If Jaime doesn't stay on mode?
3/15/2015 c15 randomlover
So you ever write a full story about their first mission sounds like a good story
So you ever write a full story about their first mission sounds like a good story
3/7/2015 c19 25candi711
Wow what an excellent story :) I'm going to keep this review short because I can't wait to read the sequel! !
25candi711Wow what an excellent story :) I'm going to keep this review short because I can't wait to read the sequel! !
11/26/2014 c8 Luna12
This chapter rocked my socks! It was perfect. All the characters were spot on and it was a great study on everyone's emotional state. I always wanted Conner to fess up and realize it wasn't all M'gann's fault. He has a temper and can overreact and be too impatient. I always wished the series showed Conner flipping a more about M'gann's kidnapping, not to mention poor Gar.
This chapter rocked my socks! It was perfect. All the characters were spot on and it was a great study on everyone's emotional state. I always wanted Conner to fess up and realize it wasn't all M'gann's fault. He has a temper and can overreact and be too impatient. I always wished the series showed Conner flipping a more about M'gann's kidnapping, not to mention poor Gar.