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15PurpleWonderPower
Oh, you meanie! You really had me worried there at the top! Awesome. Absolutely awesome.
15PurpleWonderPowerOh, you meanie! You really had me worried there at the top! Awesome. Absolutely awesome.
10/7/2016 c6 Guest
OH YOU PIECE OF WANK! I don't usually swear when reviewing but that troll was too much! I accidentally swore at the top of my lungs in a crowded restaurant because of you ! (I still love you though, damnit)
OH YOU PIECE OF WANK! I don't usually swear when reviewing but that troll was too much! I accidentally swore at the top of my lungs in a crowded restaurant because of you ! (I still love you though, damnit)
10/7/2016 c2 Guest
Hahaha! Film and phlegm! Ahaha!
Ahem, anyway, I'm only at the first chapter but this is beautifully written and exciting! No spoilers!
Hahaha! Film and phlegm! Ahaha!
Ahem, anyway, I'm only at the first chapter but this is beautifully written and exciting! No spoilers!
9/14/2015 c4 1Wow-castle
Death threats? I guess you are fine with any review aren't you. Great story. This is the 10th time I've read it. I can't get enough of it.
1Wow-castleDeath threats? I guess you are fine with any review aren't you. Great story. This is the 10th time I've read it. I can't get enough of it.
9/14/2015 c4 27Shadow'sDelight
Beautiful story so far!
I hope that you will continue this again sometime in the future.
I hope that you have a great and blessed day!
27Shadow'sDelightBeautiful story so far!
I hope that you will continue this again sometime in the future.
I hope that you have a great and blessed day!
8/5/2015 c3 PinApleUndrDaSee
I'm so fucking mad at Applejack in this story right now. so mean. great story, lovely.
I'm so fucking mad at Applejack in this story right now. so mean. great story, lovely.
6/27/2015 c6 Wow-castle
Waaaaa please stop making all these jokes about people dying or the story ending. It makes me sad.. Other than that, great story.
Waaaaa please stop making all these jokes about people dying or the story ending. It makes me sad.. Other than that, great story.
6/4/2015 c7 Mystery Reviewer
So I was really enjoying the story until I read the sentence 'those first few chapters are just awful and desperately need to be re-written'. Sweetie, to me they were amazing. You shouldn't put yourself down like that, even back in 2012 you were clearly an amazing author and I feel like you have a real talent. Sure, the very beginning of the first chapter was a little bit awkward, but only a little. If you ask me, you've created a good amount of something amazing. Heck, I'm for once satisfied with what's written in an incomplete story. Normally I get super duper grumpy when a story is incomplete, but with what you've written, the entirety of it, I am super duper happy.
So I was really enjoying the story until I read the sentence 'those first few chapters are just awful and desperately need to be re-written'. Sweetie, to me they were amazing. You shouldn't put yourself down like that, even back in 2012 you were clearly an amazing author and I feel like you have a real talent. Sure, the very beginning of the first chapter was a little bit awkward, but only a little. If you ask me, you've created a good amount of something amazing. Heck, I'm for once satisfied with what's written in an incomplete story. Normally I get super duper grumpy when a story is incomplete, but with what you've written, the entirety of it, I am super duper happy.
8/22/2014 c2 bubbleberrycrush
... I love you.
Ok, i don't have an account on here BUT i wrote a story where these two got captured in whipping, working, starving slavery and FLIM almost dies, most everyone is an oc. But... too cruel? ;)
... I love you.
Ok, i don't have an account on here BUT i wrote a story where these two got captured in whipping, working, starving slavery and FLIM almost dies, most everyone is an oc. But... too cruel? ;)
8/22/2014 c3 bubbleberrycrush
IT IS FLIM! LIKE I LIKE HIM! HE'S NOT JUST A FILLER JERK! YAY!
IT IS FLIM! LIKE I LIKE HIM! HE'S NOT JUST A FILLER JERK! YAY!
7/5/2014 c7 princess discord
please write more I love this, i ship this, I have cried for almost every chapter just please hurry with the new chapters I have read every on of your stories and out of all of them this is the best to me I will love you forever if you do
your friend
princess discord
please write more I love this, i ship this, I have cried for almost every chapter just please hurry with the new chapters I have read every on of your stories and out of all of them this is the best to me I will love you forever if you do
your friend
princess discord
4/28/2014 c2 Someone
This made want to cry ;-; so well written though and I love it
This made want to cry ;-; so well written though and I love it
2/25/2014 c6 189Sand-wolf579
This story is brilliant beyond brilliance. Hehe, Flim likes Applejack, and soon she'll be the only pony who doesn't realize it, I love it.
189Sand-wolf579This story is brilliant beyond brilliance. Hehe, Flim likes Applejack, and soon she'll be the only pony who doesn't realize it, I love it.