for Poison8/2/2016 c12 RanSlam
I love your take on the story and hope you continue sometime into the future, also I think Neela is a perfect match with Connor, with her straightforwardness and the awkward situations she puts Connor in.
I love your take on the story and hope you continue sometime into the future, also I think Neela is a perfect match with Connor, with her straightforwardness and the awkward situations she puts Connor in.
10/21/2014 c12 
8Forgetful Insanity
D'oh, are you kidding me?! I AM LEFT HANGING. I NEED THE CHAPTER WITH JAMES AND THE ACTUAL REST OF THIS STORY. I beg you to update! You portray Connor fantastically and this has humor and this follows the video game plot and she can fucking make poison so PLEASE JUST UPDATE.
8Forgetful InsanityD'oh, are you kidding me?! I AM LEFT HANGING. I NEED THE CHAPTER WITH JAMES AND THE ACTUAL REST OF THIS STORY. I beg you to update! You portray Connor fantastically and this has humor and this follows the video game plot and she can fucking make poison so PLEASE JUST UPDATE.
8/12/2014 c12 thisisnotadrill
you've gotta freaking update. You have this amazing plot line with amazing details and amazing character development only to leave it in the dust. You gotta finish strong. You gotta face it head on like a rock. Take the bull by the horns. Don't leave your precious readers hanging dude.
you've gotta freaking update. You have this amazing plot line with amazing details and amazing character development only to leave it in the dust. You gotta finish strong. You gotta face it head on like a rock. Take the bull by the horns. Don't leave your precious readers hanging dude.
6/17/2014 c12 Charmainelst
You have got me completely hooked and now I just can't wait for what's going to happen next ! Awesome story !
You have got me completely hooked and now I just can't wait for what's going to happen next ! Awesome story !
4/9/2014 c12 xSaerin
Wowowow I swear all the good fanfictions are the uncompleted ones o - o I really love this so far and it's getting so good now! I can't wait till Neela leaves Connor unexpectedly muahaha :D
Please, please update some time soon!
Wowowow I swear all the good fanfictions are the uncompleted ones o - o I really love this so far and it's getting so good now! I can't wait till Neela leaves Connor unexpectedly muahaha :D
Please, please update some time soon!
3/29/2014 c12 t
I really love this story and i hope you update soon:D!
I really love this story and i hope you update soon:D!
3/23/2014 c12 Lillith
You really should continue this!
You really should continue this!
2/21/2014 c1 Vinghen
First of all: i guess my other reviews came trough after all. Little incomplete, but - well - I'm glad they did at least.
First: sorry for that earlier spam.
Second: it was worth it :D AND, as I've promised u in pm - I'm gonna spam u more :D So, there is a masterplan in spamming: I've decided to read all of ur amazing story, from beginning to end and review every chapter as it is. As I should do when I've stared reading.
Yes, I'm hoping it will bring ur attention and - hopefully - will help with writing NEW CHAPTER (which I'm DYING to read ! ;( ).
Soo...
Here we go!
Ch1
I really liked that dual-life-thing in her. I'm so happy she's not another super-powerful-girl-assasin-before-even-started-training (which I found in a lot of fanfictions here.) It makes her so natural, and very interesting person at the same time. And Connor. Oh, my dearly dear :D I love how u portrait him in a few glimpses. Love that aura of mystery u build around him.
Looking for more.
3
:)))
First of all: i guess my other reviews came trough after all. Little incomplete, but - well - I'm glad they did at least.
First: sorry for that earlier spam.
Second: it was worth it :D AND, as I've promised u in pm - I'm gonna spam u more :D So, there is a masterplan in spamming: I've decided to read all of ur amazing story, from beginning to end and review every chapter as it is. As I should do when I've stared reading.
Yes, I'm hoping it will bring ur attention and - hopefully - will help with writing NEW CHAPTER (which I'm DYING to read ! ;( ).
Soo...
Here we go!
Ch1
I really liked that dual-life-thing in her. I'm so happy she's not another super-powerful-girl-assasin-before-even-started-training (which I found in a lot of fanfictions here.) It makes her so natural, and very interesting person at the same time. And Connor. Oh, my dearly dear :D I love how u portrait him in a few glimpses. Love that aura of mystery u build around him.
Looking for more.
3
:)))
2/12/2014 c12 Guest
OMFG...
Oh my god, oh my Goood! How can u be so cruel to me?! Letting me dying from desire to read more! Ure incredibly talented, u write so well - I've discovered "Poison" today (10 p.m. To be specific) and I've read all chapters at once (it's almost 3 a.m. AND I'm going to be some kind of zombie tomorrow at my work, thank u very much, u incredibly talented beast! :) ). I absolutely love the way u described ac's universe, ur Connor is... Well. IT. IS. CONNOR.
OMFG...
Oh my god, oh my Goood! How can u be so cruel to me?! Letting me dying from desire to read more! Ure incredibly talented, u write so well - I've discovered "Poison" today (10 p.m. To be specific) and I've read all chapters at once (it's almost 3 a.m. AND I'm going to be some kind of zombie tomorrow at my work, thank u very much, u incredibly talented beast! :) ). I absolutely love the way u described ac's universe, ur Connor is... Well. IT. IS. CONNOR.
2/12/2014 c1 Vin
OMFG!
Oh God, Oh my Goood, how can u be so cruel?! Left me with that story without continued.. You've portrayed Connor SO WELL, and Neela.. Please PLEASE write another chapter, I'm literally dying here for moar! I absolutely adore your writings style,
OMFG!
Oh God, Oh my Goood, how can u be so cruel?! Left me with that story without continued.. You've portrayed Connor SO WELL, and Neela.. Please PLEASE write another chapter, I'm literally dying here for moar! I absolutely adore your writings style,
2/9/2014 c12 DwarfInHeela
I really hope you post again soon, this story is so cute and very well written! I love that you keep Connor in character and how you portray Neela. Very cool oc! I hope there's more fluff to come :)
3 wooo ConnorXNeela!
I really hope you post again soon, this story is so cute and very well written! I love that you keep Connor in character and how you portray Neela. Very cool oc! I hope there's more fluff to come :)
3 wooo ConnorXNeela!