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3/25/2017 c25 Ryn
Wow! That's some powerful writing.
1/16/2015 c9 3emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
uh oh
1/15/2015 c8 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
awwwwwww!
1/15/2015 c7 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
uh oh
1/15/2015 c6 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
oh crap! i cried!
1/14/2015 c4 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
ooohhh. like criminal minds. the bastard is a sexual predator. a sadistic one. SOB!
1/14/2015 c3 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
i am really happy that the others are there for her. they need to catch this guy! and he sounds kinda obssessive
1/14/2015 c2 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
shit! what happened?!
1/14/2015 c1 emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl
fuck?! OMG!
9/25/2014 c25 Babs
Awwwww really enjoyed this, just read it all in one go! The emotion at the end was really real and I could have cried! Great job, interesting story, well written , well paced and full of emotion! thanks
5/18/2014 c25 00-night-eyes-00
love it
4/6/2014 c25 1Aquamarin28626
A dark subject, filled with emotions.
Well written. Please continue the sequel.
1/29/2014 c25 15CAT217
Wow! Great read, Well done. Loved every Nallen moment. Lots of emotions and action. Hope to see more in the future. :)
12/29/2013 c14 47Motsie of Atlantis
Before the diner:
He mentally chastises himself as he retrieves the keys from the ignition and gets out to join her.
After the diner:
They reach the car and she offers the keys to Callen.

Did Callen give Nell the keys in the diner and I missed it?
12/29/2013 c7 Motsie of Atlantis
Just finished this chapter - it's 3:00 AM - I really need to go to bed and get some sleep - but I also need to find out what is going on in the recesses of Nell's mind - and I don't just mean about the incident that happened in the pub and her home - she is trying to suppress all feelings for Callen based on something that happened in her past - for which she probably blames herself - what is it? And do I get to find out before I get too tired to look at my computer screen? Damn these cliffhangers!
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