for When Nightmares are Present12/8/2014 c12 Grace
This was so good!
This was so good!
12/6/2014 c3 Guest
OMG that last line was deeeep
OMG that last line was deeeep
10/16/2014 c12 whiteraven
NOOOO! I love ur writing! You are very talented and are awesome at torture and Jack's feelings. O really like reading fics where my favorite character is torn apart and put back together again and you are really good at the tearing apart!
NOOOO! I love ur writing! You are very talented and are awesome at torture and Jack's feelings. O really like reading fics where my favorite character is torn apart and put back together again and you are really good at the tearing apart!
9/22/2014 c12 
4AuroraeCanta1432
What. An. Amazing. Story. You're writing is the bomb! I've been looking for stories like this and this dominates! I want to read more so please don't delete the whole thing from FF until the entire of your revised is up because I just want to read this over and over. What a masterpiece you've written!
4AuroraeCanta1432What. An. Amazing. Story. You're writing is the bomb! I've been looking for stories like this and this dominates! I want to read more so please don't delete the whole thing from FF until the entire of your revised is up because I just want to read this over and over. What a masterpiece you've written!
7/17/2014 c12 Guest
Woah woah woah they are not literal crap they are fREAKING AMAZING! I love it. Your words have caused me so much pain, yet in a good way at the same time. I love this story, whatever you do with it will be fine :)
Woah woah woah they are not literal crap they are fREAKING AMAZING! I love it. Your words have caused me so much pain, yet in a good way at the same time. I love this story, whatever you do with it will be fine :)
7/16/2014 c12 Kira L. Lawliet
I'm so glad I finally found one of my kind! Many people are to afraide to go as far... But that's good! I thought ice be alone in the world until DIS story was here! Keel going strong ...cause my morbid curiosity demands it! Have fun! And GOOD job!
Kira L. Lawliet
I'm so glad I finally found one of my kind! Many people are to afraide to go as far... But that's good! I thought ice be alone in the world until DIS story was here! Keel going strong ...cause my morbid curiosity demands it! Have fun! And GOOD job!
Kira L. Lawliet
7/16/2014 c12 Twilight16
I'll c u l8r then!
I'll c u l8r then!
7/15/2014 c11 104GleefullyLovely
I appreciate you re-writing this amazing story, but please don't delete it until after you have published the new one!
104GleefullyLovelyI appreciate you re-writing this amazing story, but please don't delete it until after you have published the new one!
7/14/2014 c12 Someone136
OH MY GOODNESS. YOU LIVE!
OH MY GOODNESS. YOU LIVE!
7/14/2014 c12 thatcrazyjellyfish
Sucks your taking it down but hope to read it as gain soon its an amazing story
Sucks your taking it down but hope to read it as gain soon its an amazing story
7/14/2014 c12 FuntasticFrost
*cries eternally*
Okay...
I thought you had a beautiful Pitch...
I love this... T-T
*cries eternally*
Okay...
I thought you had a beautiful Pitch...
I love this... T-T
7/3/2014 c11 Ren
Oh. My. God.
The fallen angel.
Oh. My. God.
The fallen angel.
6/30/2014 c10 FuntasticFrost
I wonder what color his boxers are...they're probably red now from all the blood...
I wonder what color his boxers are...they're probably red now from all the blood...