for Walk This Way1/28/2013 c19 ak
fic bizarre!
il tue les gros bras mais il épargne le chef?
fic bizarre!
il tue les gros bras mais il épargne le chef?
1/28/2013 c3 
2Kutsuu Mugen
I just started this, but damn, if you can't be bothered to get any of the proper names right (people names, Wizengamot, Gringotts, etc.), then this fic isn't worth it.
2Kutsuu MugenI just started this, but damn, if you can't be bothered to get any of the proper names right (people names, Wizengamot, Gringotts, etc.), then this fic isn't worth it.
1/27/2013 c3 ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Great that Harry has acheived so much training. Nice work with Gringotts. Thanks for sharing!
Great that Harry has acheived so much training. Nice work with Gringotts. Thanks for sharing!
1/27/2013 c2 ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Great to see Harry getting some training and away from the Dursleys. Thanks for sharing!
Great to see Harry getting some training and away from the Dursleys. Thanks for sharing!
1/18/2013 c1 GL
tip: write the story and leave out the bullshit...i hope this tip helps you!:)
tip: write the story and leave out the bullshit...i hope this tip helps you!:)
1/15/2013 c18 4hemotem
A good read even with some massive spelling errors. Other than that I like what I am reading and hope to see more in the future.
Hemotem
4hemotemA good read even with some massive spelling errors. Other than that I like what I am reading and hope to see more in the future.
Hemotem
1/6/2013 c13 31Sakura Lisel
Um... if Dumbledore set up the whole Weasleys meeting Harry thing, WHY were they there NOW? Harry already turned down acceptance to Hogwarts, unless after talking to O they sent another owl announcing that he had changed his mind and was going to Hogwarts after all. But if he hadn't sent the letter about the change in plans yet, why were the Weasleys waiting outside the entranceway waiting to pounce on the savior of the magical world who supposedly no even coming that year, with Molly's LOUD and 'false' pretenses of having FORGOTTEN where the entrance to the hogwarts train station was, after all these years of dropping her kids off. *lol*
31Sakura LiselUm... if Dumbledore set up the whole Weasleys meeting Harry thing, WHY were they there NOW? Harry already turned down acceptance to Hogwarts, unless after talking to O they sent another owl announcing that he had changed his mind and was going to Hogwarts after all. But if he hadn't sent the letter about the change in plans yet, why were the Weasleys waiting outside the entranceway waiting to pounce on the savior of the magical world who supposedly no even coming that year, with Molly's LOUD and 'false' pretenses of having FORGOTTEN where the entrance to the hogwarts train station was, after all these years of dropping her kids off. *lol*
12/17/2012 c1 Guest
Piss Poor Grammer and Spelling
"He was the headmaster at Hogwarts a school of witchcraft and wizardry, a school for witches and wizards." - Got the name of the school wrong, you just repeated it twice.
""Albus, is it wise to leave young Harry here? Earlier I saw the other young boy….Dudley I think, hanging on his mothers leg begging for candy. Dam kid should be begging for a salad" she muttered that last bit under her breath." - I'm pretty sure the kids are only 1 year old, hardly able to eat solid food like candy much less beg for it.
Frankly you should take this story off the web and at least learn to write properly before you try posting a story that's only going to get you ridiculed and mocked for.
Piss Poor Grammer and Spelling
"He was the headmaster at Hogwarts a school of witchcraft and wizardry, a school for witches and wizards." - Got the name of the school wrong, you just repeated it twice.
""Albus, is it wise to leave young Harry here? Earlier I saw the other young boy….Dudley I think, hanging on his mothers leg begging for candy. Dam kid should be begging for a salad" she muttered that last bit under her breath." - I'm pretty sure the kids are only 1 year old, hardly able to eat solid food like candy much less beg for it.
Frankly you should take this story off the web and at least learn to write properly before you try posting a story that's only going to get you ridiculed and mocked for.
12/17/2012 c2 Guest
Runes, Apparition
it's tongue
'they began to chase Mr. Dursley' (drop the S)
Runes, Apparition
it's tongue
'they began to chase Mr. Dursley' (drop the S)
12/15/2012 c1 Guest
If you can't write a summary, you can't write a story. Enough said. On another note, what the hell is comody? You clearly didn't even bother to run through a spellcheck, who the hell would even bother reading a story like this.
If you can't write a summary, you can't write a story. Enough said. On another note, what the hell is comody? You clearly didn't even bother to run through a spellcheck, who the hell would even bother reading a story like this.
12/15/2012 c16 1RebeliousOne
That was brilliant that you had Harry get the stone out of the school. It does not hurt that he can ask Flammel for help one day if needed. Perhaps he will teach him magic that was even lost to the people that he works for. I can't wait to see Dumbles reaction to the stone being stolen and Voldie's when he hears that someone beat him to it. That should be great. :)
1RebeliousOneThat was brilliant that you had Harry get the stone out of the school. It does not hurt that he can ask Flammel for help one day if needed. Perhaps he will teach him magic that was even lost to the people that he works for. I can't wait to see Dumbles reaction to the stone being stolen and Voldie's when he hears that someone beat him to it. That should be great. :)
12/15/2012 c15 RebeliousOne
Wow, Harry kiched some serious ass this chapter. It looks like Daphne may be asked to join the unspeakables given time since she has the potential and is not evil. Mione was brilliant when she killed the troll. The reason she gave for her violence was too funny. :)
Wow, Harry kiched some serious ass this chapter. It looks like Daphne may be asked to join the unspeakables given time since she has the potential and is not evil. Mione was brilliant when she killed the troll. The reason she gave for her violence was too funny. :)