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9/13/2019 c2 Ilhaam
you didn't really change the story at all. You just swapped it from snow whits perspective to the evil queens.
you didn't really change the story at all. You just swapped it from snow whits perspective to the evil queens.
3/28/2019 c1 Guest
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3/11/2019 c2 BEX
meh...
meh...
1/23/2019 c1 kolden
Ok so we have all heard the story of Snow White. I poisoned her with the apple, she fell asleep, yadda yadda yadda. But you may not know what really happened. So I will tell you the real story.
So I was is my room. My mirror on the wall said that my wonderful daughter got a bounty on her heart. So I went to go to where she was. I walked past a hurried huntsman holding a heart.
I freaked out and asked if it was an animals. He answered me with “Snow whites”. I went back to the castle and wept. I told my mirror about it and he answered me with “ she is alive in a hut at this location”. Ok I will go there and give her food, I thought. Then I went to my chefs and told them to make the best I went to the hut. I gave her the apples and told her to be careful. Once she took a bite,she fell on the floor. Then the dwarfs started attacking me for no reason. Once I ran back to the castle I went to bed. The next day the police was at the door saying I would get a life sentence. I asked why and they said I murdered Snow white. I said I did no and that the dwarfs were lying. (The dwarfs said they saw me “poisoning” the apple). OK so I might hate her now, but would you like it if your own daughter framed you? No didn't think so.
Well I later found out my chefs poisoned the apples because they thought they were for me.
So that is the true story of Snow White.
You should use that one
Ok so we have all heard the story of Snow White. I poisoned her with the apple, she fell asleep, yadda yadda yadda. But you may not know what really happened. So I will tell you the real story.
So I was is my room. My mirror on the wall said that my wonderful daughter got a bounty on her heart. So I went to go to where she was. I walked past a hurried huntsman holding a heart.
I freaked out and asked if it was an animals. He answered me with “Snow whites”. I went back to the castle and wept. I told my mirror about it and he answered me with “ she is alive in a hut at this location”. Ok I will go there and give her food, I thought. Then I went to my chefs and told them to make the best I went to the hut. I gave her the apples and told her to be careful. Once she took a bite,she fell on the floor. Then the dwarfs started attacking me for no reason. Once I ran back to the castle I went to bed. The next day the police was at the door saying I would get a life sentence. I asked why and they said I murdered Snow white. I said I did no and that the dwarfs were lying. (The dwarfs said they saw me “poisoning” the apple). OK so I might hate her now, but would you like it if your own daughter framed you? No didn't think so.
Well I later found out my chefs poisoned the apples because they thought they were for me.
So that is the true story of Snow White.
You should use that one
12/18/2018 c1 none of your bui
It was alright and when I say alright I mean ALRIGHT. It was Quite boring need to add more word types and check your punctuation .
e.g. I was enraged "Snow White must be still be alive" I would get rid of Snow White once and for all...
The comma before ,"Snow White..., was missing.
It was alright and when I say alright I mean ALRIGHT. It was Quite boring need to add more word types and check your punctuation .
e.g. I was enraged "Snow White must be still be alive" I would get rid of Snow White once and for all...
The comma before ,"Snow White..., was missing.
12/11/2018 c1 Guest
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1/23/2018 c1 asia
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1/23/2018 c1 rosetta
this is unbelievable
this is unbelievable
9/16/2017 c1 Sreeja
I loved this . I am going to use it for homework
I loved this . I am going to use it for homework
5/1/2017 c1 Olive
I like this version better...
I like this version better...
3/13/2017 c1 Guest
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12/18/2016 c2 Guest
Well, it's certainly what it says on the label- Snow White from the villain's perspective. It's not a terribly interesting version, unfortunately.
Well, it's certainly what it says on the label- Snow White from the villain's perspective. It's not a terribly interesting version, unfortunately.
10/28/2015 c1 WTF
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