for The Untold Story12/13/2012 c9 JaneDoe452
And that is what we ought to have seen. Thank you so much, it's practically perfect.
And that is what we ought to have seen. Thank you so much, it's practically perfect.
12/13/2012 c9 
20Rubytronix
Wonderful! *sobs.* really great chapter! Poor Danny! Now where's those tissues!
20RubytronixWonderful! *sobs.* really great chapter! Poor Danny! Now where's those tissues!
12/13/2012 c9 TheMusicKnows
Awww that was lovely at the end, but I was surprised nothing Like that did not come up in the show, that I noticed...
Awww that was lovely at the end, but I was surprised nothing Like that did not come up in the show, that I noticed...
12/13/2012 c8 Rubytronix
Poor Sarah! At last we have an explanation of her death- it was just glossed over in the series. You did a good job of it! Very sad!
Poor Sarah! At last we have an explanation of her death- it was just glossed over in the series. You did a good job of it! Very sad!
12/11/2012 c7 TheMusicKnows
Awww poor Sarah, I hope she lives on your world, id hate to see her die :(
Awww poor Sarah, I hope she lives on your world, id hate to see her die :(
12/11/2012 c6 TheMusicKnows
Sarah, I am a trained soldier, I get paid to notice things.
Poor Becker at this line because he loved Sarah, but now its ok because he has jess in later series...
Sarah, I am a trained soldier, I get paid to notice things.
Poor Becker at this line because he loved Sarah, but now its ok because he has jess in later series...
12/8/2012 c1 Rubytronix
This was really nice. Just one small criticism- Connor's spelt with an 'o' not an 'e'- but hey, don't beat yourself up about it, it was a really good fic! You captured Danny and Sarah perfectly! I enjoyed it!
This was really nice. Just one small criticism- Connor's spelt with an 'o' not an 'e'- but hey, don't beat yourself up about it, it was a really good fic! You captured Danny and Sarah perfectly! I enjoyed it!
12/7/2012 c1 JaneDoe452
Yayy! Danny/Sarah! Finally, I always though they had way more chemistry than Sarah/Becker (which was just random) and this is really sweet and believable. Thank you. Is there more to come?
Yayy! Danny/Sarah! Finally, I always though they had way more chemistry than Sarah/Becker (which was just random) and this is really sweet and believable. Thank you. Is there more to come?