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12/13/2012 c9 JaneDoe452
And that is what we ought to have seen. Thank you so much, it's practically perfect.
12/13/2012 c9 20Rubytronix
Wonderful! *sobs.* really great chapter! Poor Danny! Now where's those tissues!
12/13/2012 c9 TheMusicKnows
Awww that was lovely at the end, but I was surprised nothing Like that did not come up in the show, that I noticed...
12/13/2012 c8 Rubytronix
Poor Sarah! At last we have an explanation of her death- it was just glossed over in the series. You did a good job of it! Very sad!
12/11/2012 c7 TheMusicKnows
Awww poor Sarah, I hope she lives on your world, id hate to see her die :(
12/11/2012 c7 Rubytronix
Oh *sobs*! When they saw the picture! *sniff*! So sad! Brilliant chapter.
12/11/2012 c6 TheMusicKnows
Sarah, I am a trained soldier, I get paid to notice things.

Poor Becker at this line because he loved Sarah, but now its ok because he has jess in later series...
12/10/2012 c5 TheMusicKnows
Aww they are so sweet together :)
12/10/2012 c5 Rubytronix
I'm really loving this fic. Can't wait for more!
12/9/2012 c4 TheMusicKnows
awww danny and sarah are so cute together :) love it
12/9/2012 c3 TheMusicKnows
thts an awesome chapter:)
12/9/2012 c2 TheMusicKnows
Lol Danny and Sarah...finally...they are good together :)
12/8/2012 c2 JaneDoe452
Love it, really sweet and I like the way you incorporated the episode.
12/8/2012 c1 Rubytronix
This was really nice. Just one small criticism- Connor's spelt with an 'o' not an 'e'- but hey, don't beat yourself up about it, it was a really good fic! You captured Danny and Sarah perfectly! I enjoyed it!
12/7/2012 c1 JaneDoe452
Yayy! Danny/Sarah! Finally, I always though they had way more chemistry than Sarah/Becker (which was just random) and this is really sweet and believable. Thank you. Is there more to come?

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