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7/31/2014 c1 9Crystal Dragon's blood
3/3/2013 c1 33DarkPriestessOfHyrule
What if I was wandering around and saw the tempting description and read it? And what if I liked this? ...why am I asking you this? I love it! Great job. Reminds me of the Robin Maxwell tarzan thing mr. ral conrath (clayton) will always be a perv! What a wonderful read.
12/22/2012 c1 52LionshadeSC
well. . .. that escalated quickly xD

it felt like everything was going really, really fast. it felt like i was reading a summary of a story rather than a single chapter.

you could easily, EASILY turn this into a chapter story, and a pretty good one too. you have the base of it, and it could at least be a few chapters long :D

it was good though, even if it moved along a little too quickly. it felt like i didn't get to really understand the emotions and the suspicions of the characters before ZIP- everything was wrapped up and done.

if you ever do want to turn this into a continuing story, pm me and i'll beta it for you if you want :D
12/9/2012 c1 20Wolf skater
Lol nice

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