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12/10/2012 c1 BayWeather
First off, as a beta reader, I must say you have good grammar. I only caught a few mistakes. "My name is Lily Evans and I have lost faith," should have a comma after Lily Evans. This piece is interesting, I think it has good insight on Lily. I haven't finished the Harry Potter serious though, so I can't be completely sure.

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