for 03 All Creatures Great and Small9/23/2013 c14 bluemarlin
Wonderful chapter. Hope Abby and Jack can patch up their differences. Going with Kenson will not end well for Shepard, I think. Please continue.
Wonderful chapter. Hope Abby and Jack can patch up their differences. Going with Kenson will not end well for Shepard, I think. Please continue.
9/23/2013 c14 
1subsider34
This will not end well. Shepard won't wake up in time to break out.
On the other hand, I'm extremely interested in how this will work out with Kelly and Jack off-ship. Keep up the good work!
1subsider34This will not end well. Shepard won't wake up in time to break out.
On the other hand, I'm extremely interested in how this will work out with Kelly and Jack off-ship. Keep up the good work!
9/21/2013 c13 10owelpost
This was a wonderful, heartbreaking chapter. So many people examining their feelings and still coming up short. As always a pleasure to read. Looking forward to more! Thank you for sharing.
10owelpostThis was a wonderful, heartbreaking chapter. So many people examining their feelings and still coming up short. As always a pleasure to read. Looking forward to more! Thank you for sharing.
9/18/2013 c13 charlie
Read this story up to chapter 13 in one sitting. A great read thus far. The relationships are just getting more complex by the chapter. But hey nobody ever said it was simple. Feel sorry for some of characters though - in agony in one way or another all of them. Please continue so that it can be resolved. Very entrtaining thanks.
Read this story up to chapter 13 in one sitting. A great read thus far. The relationships are just getting more complex by the chapter. But hey nobody ever said it was simple. Feel sorry for some of characters though - in agony in one way or another all of them. Please continue so that it can be resolved. Very entrtaining thanks.
9/16/2013 c13 kirbster676
Not sure that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Abby is really making a mess of things with Asura, I don't think things will go well whem she wakes up and finds Abby missing.
Right now my mind goes to Hamlet after reading this chapter. Though with Abby in Hamlet's place. 'The woman who could not make up her mind.'
Not sure that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Abby is really making a mess of things with Asura, I don't think things will go well whem she wakes up and finds Abby missing.
Right now my mind goes to Hamlet after reading this chapter. Though with Abby in Hamlet's place. 'The woman who could not make up her mind.'
9/15/2013 c13 12Atsirk Enoh
I just love your stories. I read your first story before and then forgot what it was called, it took me a long time to find it again and I'm glad I did. I wonder what Abby's going to do know.
12Atsirk EnohI just love your stories. I read your first story before and then forgot what it was called, it took me a long time to find it again and I'm glad I did. I wonder what Abby's going to do know.
9/13/2013 c13 bluemarlin
Outstanding chapter. Enjoyed Chakwas in this chapter and Garrus walking Miranda to her room. Hope Abby works out her issues with Asura. Please continue.
Outstanding chapter. Enjoyed Chakwas in this chapter and Garrus walking Miranda to her room. Hope Abby works out her issues with Asura. Please continue.
9/13/2013 c13 1subsider34
Thank god Abby's finally starting to work through her issues. But she'd naive if she thinks she hasn't already hurt Asura. This entire ordeal has gone on far too long.
I worry about Kenson though, I can't believe Shepard didn't associate asymptomatic brain damage with indoctrination. Especially given what Kenson was studying.
I look forward to finding out what happens next. Keep up the good work!
1subsider34Thank god Abby's finally starting to work through her issues. But she'd naive if she thinks she hasn't already hurt Asura. This entire ordeal has gone on far too long.
I worry about Kenson though, I can't believe Shepard didn't associate asymptomatic brain damage with indoctrination. Especially given what Kenson was studying.
I look forward to finding out what happens next. Keep up the good work!
8/20/2013 c12 kirbster676
Great chapters, Jack always awesome, enjoy how you have Jack being the powerful human biotic that she's supposed to be.
Abbie and Asura, seems Abbie is keeping things at a standstill, I believe that Asura loves her more than just someone that she can touch. But Abbie, I doubt she knows what she wants, but don't seem to mind dragging Asura along while she figures it out.
Great chapters, Jack always awesome, enjoy how you have Jack being the powerful human biotic that she's supposed to be.
Abbie and Asura, seems Abbie is keeping things at a standstill, I believe that Asura loves her more than just someone that she can touch. But Abbie, I doubt she knows what she wants, but don't seem to mind dragging Asura along while she figures it out.
8/15/2013 c12 bluemarlin
Another excellent chapter. Enjoyed Jack's entrance into the fight. Guessing Kenson is indoctrinated. Worried for Abby and Asura now that Tevos describes Phora as 'quite mad'. Looking forward to more.
Another excellent chapter. Enjoyed Jack's entrance into the fight. Guessing Kenson is indoctrinated. Worried for Abby and Asura now that Tevos describes Phora as 'quite mad'. Looking forward to more.
8/13/2013 c12 1subsider34
This chapter will certainly have major repercussions. Hopefully Shepard manages to figure out what was going on before the Reapers Arrive.
Also, Abby's attitude is getting concerning. Its like she's refusing to think about a relationship with Asura and using the ignorance that brings to justify refusing to think about a relationship with Asura. Worse, I don't see it getting better anytime soon.
1subsider34This chapter will certainly have major repercussions. Hopefully Shepard manages to figure out what was going on before the Reapers Arrive.
Also, Abby's attitude is getting concerning. Its like she's refusing to think about a relationship with Asura and using the ignorance that brings to justify refusing to think about a relationship with Asura. Worse, I don't see it getting better anytime soon.
8/13/2013 c12 LifeIsAGreatAdventure
I'm not sure how to respond to this chapter. In many ways I feel the primary emotional scene is that between Asura and Abby. Recognizing that their relationship is a huge change in perspective for Abby, I still struggle to envision how anyone could refuse interaction that would lead to greater health for both partners no matter that it is such a change. Most people (despite our loud protestations) are not as sexually identified with one type of gender relationship as we would argue and this is more true of women than men-or so the literature and a cousin who specializes in the psychology of sexual identification say. This seems particularly true where there is an obvious emotional attachment no matter its source.
Still, a great chapter and I will look forward to seeing more in the future...hoping that that social life is working out too.
I'm not sure how to respond to this chapter. In many ways I feel the primary emotional scene is that between Asura and Abby. Recognizing that their relationship is a huge change in perspective for Abby, I still struggle to envision how anyone could refuse interaction that would lead to greater health for both partners no matter that it is such a change. Most people (despite our loud protestations) are not as sexually identified with one type of gender relationship as we would argue and this is more true of women than men-or so the literature and a cousin who specializes in the psychology of sexual identification say. This seems particularly true where there is an obvious emotional attachment no matter its source.
Still, a great chapter and I will look forward to seeing more in the future...hoping that that social life is working out too.
8/9/2013 c11 subsider34
Excellent chapter! You kept the quality of the Omega part as high as ever and even managed to make the Ba'hak section interesting. The dialog with Kensen was the main driving factor in this, btw.
Anyways, I eagerly look forward to reading future chapters. You're an incredible writer, and this series is one of the most thoughtful, emotional, compelling, body of works I've ever read. I pray you we get to see more.
Excellent chapter! You kept the quality of the Omega part as high as ever and even managed to make the Ba'hak section interesting. The dialog with Kensen was the main driving factor in this, btw.
Anyways, I eagerly look forward to reading future chapters. You're an incredible writer, and this series is one of the most thoughtful, emotional, compelling, body of works I've ever read. I pray you we get to see more.