
12/29/2020 c22 SuzysArt
Captain Shepard omg I love this woman XD ahaha! Just waltzes into Abby's apartment and invites herself into Asuras investigation before they realized what happened. Pure. Gold.
Captain Shepard omg I love this woman XD ahaha! Just waltzes into Abby's apartment and invites herself into Asuras investigation before they realized what happened. Pure. Gold.
12/28/2020 c40
4magnusvictor
Goodness, is it a wild ride to read through this whole series (for the third time, now). Still an amazingly good story, and I am ecstatic to see it continuing!

Goodness, is it a wild ride to read through this whole series (for the third time, now). Still an amazingly good story, and I am ecstatic to see it continuing!
12/28/2020 c17
2SuzysArt
And she wakes up in the past at Abby's Vet clinic! So that's how she got those wounds. Can't help but wonder after reading this chapter if you are going to tie in your side story.

And she wakes up in the past at Abby's Vet clinic! So that's how she got those wounds. Can't help but wonder after reading this chapter if you are going to tie in your side story.
12/28/2020 c14 SuzysArt
It's Arrival but the story is unfolding differently. Not just retelling the dlc from a character's perspective but throwing in a few different plot cookies and additional characters. * Eats cookies with a glass of milk * And the tension brought about by a second Justicar threatening to reveal Asura's nature is keeping me at the edge of my seat reading this. Then there is the delema Abby is facing with not only her relationship with Asura but coming to terms with living inside a video game. Quite the puzzle
It's Arrival but the story is unfolding differently. Not just retelling the dlc from a character's perspective but throwing in a few different plot cookies and additional characters. * Eats cookies with a glass of milk * And the tension brought about by a second Justicar threatening to reveal Asura's nature is keeping me at the edge of my seat reading this. Then there is the delema Abby is facing with not only her relationship with Asura but coming to terms with living inside a video game. Quite the puzzle
12/27/2020 c11 SuzysArt
WHATS UP BITCHES IM BACK! God I love how you write Jack. So much win! And calling in 'calibrations' on the radio line had be laughing real good. Edi is a robo-sweetheart and I enjoyed reading her interaction with Samara. There is so much angst but it's half the fun of romance stories. I think another reason I enjoy reading this fic is because all the characters are true to their original personalities from the game and not changed any way to further the plot. Thanks for keeping them recognizable. That's a huge thing for me and reading fanfics.
WHATS UP BITCHES IM BACK! God I love how you write Jack. So much win! And calling in 'calibrations' on the radio line had be laughing real good. Edi is a robo-sweetheart and I enjoyed reading her interaction with Samara. There is so much angst but it's half the fun of romance stories. I think another reason I enjoy reading this fic is because all the characters are true to their original personalities from the game and not changed any way to further the plot. Thanks for keeping them recognizable. That's a huge thing for me and reading fanfics.
12/21/2020 c40
1AJAX087
Great chapter, I forgot how much I looked forward to updates in this story, waiting with baited breath for the next one, keep up the great work!

Great chapter, I forgot how much I looked forward to updates in this story, waiting with baited breath for the next one, keep up the great work!
12/20/2020 c40 LifeIsAGreatAdventure
Great chapter. You do a nice job of having Hacket and Shepard interact and although at times I've not been crazy about how you handle Jack, in this chapter the interaction between Jack and Shepard is very tremendous. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.
Great chapter. You do a nice job of having Hacket and Shepard interact and although at times I've not been crazy about how you handle Jack, in this chapter the interaction between Jack and Shepard is very tremendous. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.
12/19/2020 c39 jmeson75
So happy to see this story continue! It is definitely at the top of a long list of stories that I love! I'm looking forward to seeing more and am also glad to hear you are doing well. :)
So happy to see this story continue! It is definitely at the top of a long list of stories that I love! I'm looking forward to seeing more and am also glad to hear you are doing well. :)
12/16/2020 c37 AJAX087
So glad that you decided to pick this story up again, I went back to the chapter you said you started to make changes and have read to this point. Love the way your continuing on and how your overcoming the hurdles in your life, keep on keeping on and I look forward to the rest of this series. :)
So glad that you decided to pick this story up again, I went back to the chapter you said you started to make changes and have read to this point. Love the way your continuing on and how your overcoming the hurdles in your life, keep on keeping on and I look forward to the rest of this series. :)