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12/14/2012 c2 Guest
Long chapters are better than small ones in my opinion lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/11/2012 c1 Guest
This is really good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/10/2012 c1 Ireadsgood
Welcome back! Thank you for this surprise Christmas gift :P! I thought you had abandoned the new story idea, glad to see otherwise! (Thank you Buck50!)
I've also noticed a great improvement in grammar, while not perfect, you've definitely improved. I also wish to recommend you improve on the overall flow of the essay as it can get awkward at some points.
I'm also in agreement with you and pleased to see you taking the more realistic route instead of the instant romance. I also am a fan of Nihlus! While I'm disheartened that I will have to wait a week for your updates, I'm still ecstatic that your writing! I hope you do well and your studies and cannot wait to continue reading your story!
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