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1/23 c23 13creativesm75
12/19/2020 c1 Dissapointed
Shanks losing his arm to a common Sea King... ugh. Why do I think it's bullshit?

I know it happened in cannon but still!
12/15/2020 c13 Guest
The story in theory is great, but the structure and punctuation just makes it not worth reading.
8/13/2020 c9 Guest
This story had so much potential and a great start. It’s a shame that you nerfed the Rumble Rumble Fruit by like 800%, and adding that random ass OC Adam just made this fic less interesting
7/20/2020 c13 Guest
Finally using the rumble fruit correctly lol he should embarrass every single pirate in the east blue and since he has haki he will beat crocodile but it will be difficult since his fight is in the desert so he has home field advantage so to speak
7/20/2020 c9 Guest
Again nerfing the lighting logia lol does this author know how strong it is? Making him look like a beta
7/20/2020 c8 Guest
Nerfing a logia what a trash novel
7/20/2020 c5 Guest
What’s the point? He literally can take them out so why drag out the original plot? Trash
7/5/2020 c23 Tdog Smith
I really like this story I hope you make more chapters of it.
11/3/2019 c11 markshandon7
Lighting is 17 times hotter than the outer layer of the sun. No one could survive even a lightning fist. Or Lightning strike basically El Thor
9/25/2019 c2 Guest23
Look I'm only on chapter 2 but I'm posting this review now and Hope that you will update this story soon if you are alive there are not too many Marine Luffy stories and this with him having a logia you are just asking me to read so please if you are still alive and still into the story update worst case scenario rewrite but please continue with your story Marine Luffy plus logia Luffy is gold
8/2/2019 c3 Guest
Alright this is stupid/idiotic/moronic. Have you even read your own story at all? Or you just type and post it without nary a care whatever shit you write? Helmeppo the idiot turned into godlike being with the power of omnipresence. Luffy punch him to the wall, luffy go to marine base in high speed, and look there's helmeppo in high spirits bullying little girl and not to forget the little girl is omnipresent too.
7/24/2019 c23 jimmysmith790
you need to write more this story was a good story
6/19/2019 c18 jimmysmith790
you need to write more of these store
6/19/2019 c1 1Iamsunny9
Man What were you drinking when writing the story. Marine going alone with a ship than gathering a crew. And that pairing luffy x hancock can never happen. He works for marine and as such for tenryubito.
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