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12/9/2024 c12 Proxygalaxy2.0
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Hello, This is Fiction Life,
May I share your Harry Potter story on YouTube with an audience that prefers listening over reading?
Channel link: FictionLife-zl3oc
I will give proper credit in the description of your story and also share the video link under your story comment for your view. We highly respect authors and their copyright.
This is a better way to spread your story to a larger audience. Not only will you gain more hits on your work, but I will also benefit from increased exposure through my channel (monetized).
If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am happy to make changes according to your wishes.
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11/3/2024 c13 candlewyk
Oooooooh wouldn't be cool to have Umbridge kill Fudge by stabbing him to death with a blood quill, turn herself in covered in Fudge's blood and the ram the bllod quill straight through her own eye into her brain? Ok maybe I watch too much Walking Dead, but yeah...
Oooooooh wouldn't be cool to have Umbridge kill Fudge by stabbing him to death with a blood quill, turn herself in covered in Fudge's blood and the ram the bllod quill straight through her own eye into her brain? Ok maybe I watch too much Walking Dead, but yeah...
11/1/2024 c13 Taiyou Ryuu
You've moved on, so why are you suddenly updating already complete fics? It seems childish of you.
You've moved on, so why are you suddenly updating already complete fics? It seems childish of you.
2/7/2024 c4 Amber Dexter
Oh no!
Oh no!
12/17/2023 c13 edwards-sparrow
I'm sorry you felt you could no longer write on ffn you're very talented I just felt someone should tell that. If I could I'd like to ask if I could continue this or at least try?
I'm sorry you felt you could no longer write on ffn you're very talented I just felt someone should tell that. If I could I'd like to ask if I could continue this or at least try?
12/15/2023 c13 
4Ilena Petrova
ok this is ot right in my opinion with remus, for gods sake harry understood why neville would never work with Bellatrix and when remus basucally sais the same witn fenrir its suddenly not excepted? fenrir is literally the reason why r eus did go through hell and back since he was a small child. its why he was never sble to get a long term job ect. so naturally he doesnt want to work with him. why is nevilles reason ok and not remus. sorry thats really something that makes your harry seem really idiotic and just not reasonable
4Ilena Petrovaok this is ot right in my opinion with remus, for gods sake harry understood why neville would never work with Bellatrix and when remus basucally sais the same witn fenrir its suddenly not excepted? fenrir is literally the reason why r eus did go through hell and back since he was a small child. its why he was never sble to get a long term job ect. so naturally he doesnt want to work with him. why is nevilles reason ok and not remus. sorry thats really something that makes your harry seem really idiotic and just not reasonable
12/15/2023 c4 Ilena Petrova
one thing that sits wrong here, the cloak is an old magical artifact it literally cant be destroyed, let alone by someine like ron weasly, the Fotoalbum ect i can undertsand but not the cloak
one thing that sits wrong here, the cloak is an old magical artifact it literally cant be destroyed, let alone by someine like ron weasly, the Fotoalbum ect i can undertsand but not the cloak
3/17/2023 c13 1Darknessdawns
Well, it was an interesting piece. Unfortunately things moved extremely fast. Due to the fast pace of the story the character development just didn't feel right. After all barely three months passed in the entire story. I just can't see the deep trust and other emotional bonds forming in what looked to be just two weeks. If the timeline had been more spread out things would have worked much better.
1DarknessdawnsWell, it was an interesting piece. Unfortunately things moved extremely fast. Due to the fast pace of the story the character development just didn't feel right. After all barely three months passed in the entire story. I just can't see the deep trust and other emotional bonds forming in what looked to be just two weeks. If the timeline had been more spread out things would have worked much better.
1/19/2023 c13 flashingreeneyes
That was FANTASTIC! I always felt that Remus should have been MORE. Not less.
That was FANTASTIC! I always felt that Remus should have been MORE. Not less.
7/26/2022 c13 Guest
Wow. Dark but interesting
Wow. Dark but interesting