for Baby Octopus8/23/2019 c1 
6Tanya Takaishi
The prose in this is so beautiful. I felt like I was waiting in anticipation for each of Hikari's visits to the ramen shop. The what do you recommend? line, the lack of it and it's reapparence were so well done. Daisuke was sort of sweetly melancholy throughout the whole thing. Which only seems right when it involves her (or maybe Ken). Such a nice piece. Glad I stumbled upon it.
6Tanya TakaishiThe prose in this is so beautiful. I felt like I was waiting in anticipation for each of Hikari's visits to the ramen shop. The what do you recommend? line, the lack of it and it's reapparence were so well done. Daisuke was sort of sweetly melancholy throughout the whole thing. Which only seems right when it involves her (or maybe Ken). Such a nice piece. Glad I stumbled upon it.
1/6/2016 c1 1T D'Amaze
I favourited this forever ago but never left a review, which is a shame. Its well written and encompasses exactly what I like about Daikari. All in all a great one shot. Thank you for writing it.
1T D'AmazeI favourited this forever ago but never left a review, which is a shame. Its well written and encompasses exactly what I like about Daikari. All in all a great one shot. Thank you for writing it.
1/16/2014 c1 AmourDreams
I'm a huge takari fan and don't normally read daikari stories...but this was really cute. I liked it a lot. :)
I'm a huge takari fan and don't normally read daikari stories...but this was really cute. I liked it a lot. :)
12/13/2012 c1 3kitto-be-alright
That was such a sweet little one shot. Very short story-esque, if you know what I mean? Short and sweet with little dialogue and great periods of time passing, it is exactly how a short story should be! Well done!
3kitto-be-alrightThat was such a sweet little one shot. Very short story-esque, if you know what I mean? Short and sweet with little dialogue and great periods of time passing, it is exactly how a short story should be! Well done!
12/12/2012 c1 16Cearta Day
:) Well you can definitely write. This was very well done and a very cute story. The tone and mood were perfect plus the title's a good attention grabber!
16Cearta Day:) Well you can definitely write. This was very well done and a very cute story. The tone and mood were perfect plus the title's a good attention grabber!