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12/23/2012 c1 Tyrant Ratatosk
Love it, that's all I can say.
12/20/2012 c1 James Birdsong
Awesome. Cute
12/16/2012 c1 1Mistress Minty
Dang, Charlotte...Did you start your period early or something? I felt badly for poor Jonathan here, getting scolded and all. Pfft, but I used to abandon Charlotte all the time when I played PoR. Brings back fond memories!

But seriously, she seemed a tad over-the-top. Not much, but it should be toned down some. Just my opinion, though. This was too cute. I just love this pairing and so does every other CVtard I know. And reading this makes me want to replay the stupid game and ship this EVEN HARDER. XD

You had a few grammar and spelling errors in some spots. Nothing crucial, but you could use the proofreader in the Documents Manager to edit your fics to catch any mistakes before you post them. And thanks for bolding your Author's Notes! Although, you may want to separate the one at the end like you did for the one at the beginning. Thanks for another entertaining read! ;)
12/13/2012 c1 14DarkFonist
Aw, how cute.

The details and descriptions were well done and the plot was short and sweet. My praises to you.

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