for Place Among the Ashes11/17/2022 c3 lexia the beautiful wolf
I love this chapter was so well written, and I love greybacks character.
will you be going back to the story "deliver us from sorrows hold"
I love this chapter was so well written, and I love greybacks character.
will you be going back to the story "deliver us from sorrows hold"
7/3/2022 c7 
3Menodara
I would really love to see this updated. The characters are gripping, and I would love to see more of Greyback's sons and Harry growing into a role, a powerful member, a feared personality within the pack.
3MenodaraI would really love to see this updated. The characters are gripping, and I would love to see more of Greyback's sons and Harry growing into a role, a powerful member, a feared personality within the pack.
3/7/2022 c7 lexia the beautiful wolf
this is so good! I love how you write your characters,you have me hooked.
this is so good! I love how you write your characters,you have me hooked.
8/6/2021 c7 Perlz
"He didn't need someone—a stranger— to emphasize the severity of an issue that he'd already solved."
He's not a stranger, he's the beta of the pack that Harry put in danger. And if you are really sorry you don't get offended when people bring it up
"He didn't need someone—a stranger— to emphasize the severity of an issue that he'd already solved."
He's not a stranger, he's the beta of the pack that Harry put in danger. And if you are really sorry you don't get offended when people bring it up
8/6/2021 c7 Perlz
Aelius had every right to be angry at Harry and speak to him like that. Harry feels...no guilt at his actions?
Aelius had every right to be angry at Harry and speak to him like that. Harry feels...no guilt at his actions?
8/6/2021 c3 Perlz
"With five members already removed from his pack, Greyback refused to exile any more pack mates. "
Is getting Harry even worth this? And really Harry? He wasn't treated so bad so werewolves must be ok? His willfull ignorance is somewhat in character but hard to read.
"With five members already removed from his pack, Greyback refused to exile any more pack mates. "
Is getting Harry even worth this? And really Harry? He wasn't treated so bad so werewolves must be ok? His willfull ignorance is somewhat in character but hard to read.
8/6/2021 c2 Perlz
Poor Harry doesnt even understand he was abused. Ans stupid stupid meddling Dumbledore did everything he could to keep him with his abusers.
Poor Harry doesnt even understand he was abused. Ans stupid stupid meddling Dumbledore did everything he could to keep him with his abusers.
8/6/2021 c1 Perlz
"So, essentially, the rewarded a man who destroyed countless of lives," Harry murmured bitterly."
Yes...but also saved his species from eradication by those same wizards. The wizards are coming off as more evil here.
"So, essentially, the rewarded a man who destroyed countless of lives," Harry murmured bitterly."
Yes...but also saved his species from eradication by those same wizards. The wizards are coming off as more evil here.
8/20/2020 c7 lexia the beautiful wolf
I hope u one day continue this,havnt seen Harry with this type of personality in your other stories so it's abit different.
I hope u one day continue this,havnt seen Harry with this type of personality in your other stories so it's abit different.
6/16/2020 c6 Guest
I wish you would finish this.
I adore it.
I wish you would finish this.
I adore it.
3/9/2020 c7 moonrabbit04
This is so good! I hope you don't plan to just leave it be and that you'll update at some point!
~moonrabbit04
This is so good! I hope you don't plan to just leave it be and that you'll update at some point!
~moonrabbit04