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12/15/2012 c1 socar37
Whee! Love it so far. Please continue.
12/15/2012 c1 2Mark Solo
Intresting idea. Hope to see you write more of this story.
12/15/2012 c1 JNX691
I would love to see this continued, t'was quite funny
KEEP IT UP!

JNX
12/15/2012 c1 2Kail Blade
Noticed you randomly switched between first and third POV a couple of times, and theres a few spelling mistakes.
12/15/2012 c1 nimb09
want more. it very good. can't wait to see what going to happen next.
12/15/2012 c1 mattcun
plz write more
12/15/2012 c1 Rebirthed King
Fantastic, I must say. I like it. Please continue.
12/15/2012 c1 lazyguy90
Nice work on this.

Looks interesting.

Keep at it.
12/15/2012 c1 7Aytheria
This...is interesting. I wouldn't mind reading more. I would recommend picking a point of view and sticking with it. You switched between first person and third in the same paragraph, a big no-no and very confusing. But nevertheless, the idea is very intriguing and I liked that bit at the end where Harry's rant, had you no background knowledge of his trials, sounds an awful lot like something Lucifer would say if confronted about why he 'fell'. Sneaky ;P

Please do continue?

Ria
12/15/2012 c1 austmadman
This looks like it will be a hilarious story please continue it
12/15/2012 c1 firelordeg
thank you for sharing fantastic chapter please continue as this definitely needs to be more than a one shot
12/15/2012 c1 1Leon2108
very interesting, would love to see more.
12/14/2012 c1 aulin
Magnificent! Please continue, perhaps with Harry/Dawn.
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