for Head Wounds9/29/2016 c1 Guest
I never read AUs but I absolutely love this one.
Thank you for sharing.
I never read AUs but I absolutely love this one.
Thank you for sharing.
4/26/2016 c1 
17Byakuei
I really enjoyed this. I just wish there were more. it's 2016 and I'm still a hard core sorato shipper.
17ByakueiI really enjoyed this. I just wish there were more. it's 2016 and I'm still a hard core sorato shipper.
10/14/2013 c1 12Elven Star Angel
Oh dear. I want to read more. And I want to read more now!
Would you please continue this!? Pleas pretty please pretty pleaaase!?
12Elven Star AngelOh dear. I want to read more. And I want to read more now!
Would you please continue this!? Pleas pretty please pretty pleaaase!?
6/19/2013 c1 10Aklee
Usually I don't read AU fics, but I really really enjoyed this! Sora is so adorable :) Loved it.
10AkleeUsually I don't read AU fics, but I really really enjoyed this! Sora is so adorable :) Loved it.
6/3/2013 c1 10videogamenerd101
[For a moment, she stood there, brown eyes glaring at the vacated platform, every other sense of hers ignoring the push and shove of the surrounding concert-goers as they celebrated their crass victory.] There shouldn't be a hyphen in "concertgoers".
["Hell, even I know that one because of you even though his music is positively yawn-inducing."] There shouldn't be a hyphen in "yawn inducing" because that phrasal adjective follows the noun it modifies.
[Sora's only guilty pleasure (aside from watching daytime talkshows), was listening to Yamato Ishida's music.] That comma shouldn't be there.
[When she looked at her handwriting on his arm, it looked like a kindergartener had scribbled her name and number.] You misspelles "kindergartner".
[She felt ten years younger in that instant, mentally became her fifteen year old self with no worries about the future and no qualms about the past.] There should be hyphens in "fifteen-year-old".
Okay, now that all the grammar stuf is out of the way, I have to say that I really liked this one-shot. You've got a really nice writing style, and once in a while, it borders what I consider beautiful. Maybe it really is beautiful. But yeah, I love how you made Sora one of Yamato's closet fangirls. For an AU fic, you definitely did an incredible job in keeping them in character. Lol, and it must've been so exciting for Sora for Yamato to ask him for his number.
And to tell the truth, I think this was already satisfying enough without even continuing this. I loved it nonetheless!
Great one-shot! This is a definite favorite! :D
10videogamenerd101[For a moment, she stood there, brown eyes glaring at the vacated platform, every other sense of hers ignoring the push and shove of the surrounding concert-goers as they celebrated their crass victory.] There shouldn't be a hyphen in "concertgoers".
["Hell, even I know that one because of you even though his music is positively yawn-inducing."] There shouldn't be a hyphen in "yawn inducing" because that phrasal adjective follows the noun it modifies.
[Sora's only guilty pleasure (aside from watching daytime talkshows), was listening to Yamato Ishida's music.] That comma shouldn't be there.
[When she looked at her handwriting on his arm, it looked like a kindergartener had scribbled her name and number.] You misspelles "kindergartner".
[She felt ten years younger in that instant, mentally became her fifteen year old self with no worries about the future and no qualms about the past.] There should be hyphens in "fifteen-year-old".
Okay, now that all the grammar stuf is out of the way, I have to say that I really liked this one-shot. You've got a really nice writing style, and once in a while, it borders what I consider beautiful. Maybe it really is beautiful. But yeah, I love how you made Sora one of Yamato's closet fangirls. For an AU fic, you definitely did an incredible job in keeping them in character. Lol, and it must've been so exciting for Sora for Yamato to ask him for his number.
And to tell the truth, I think this was already satisfying enough without even continuing this. I loved it nonetheless!
Great one-shot! This is a definite favorite! :D
1/10/2013 c1 SoratoFTW
Update please!
Update please!
12/16/2012 c1 5blueberrrykisses
This was all very cute. Sora's shyness and Yamato's cool composure was perfect. It would be nice if there was a second chapter, but if not oh well.
5blueberrrykissesThis was all very cute. Sora's shyness and Yamato's cool composure was perfect. It would be nice if there was a second chapter, but if not oh well.
12/15/2012 c1 Koumi-Locc
Nice Sorato fic it was coo! Mimi was mention but not Koumi if it had Koumi Kou be like wtf right we did nothing while you guys went out... Koumi/Sorato Gone Kuz... Look out for New Generation Koumi Fans taking ova in this bitch... TaiJun and Taichi/Oc Needs more Hits...
Nice Sorato fic it was coo! Mimi was mention but not Koumi if it had Koumi Kou be like wtf right we did nothing while you guys went out... Koumi/Sorato Gone Kuz... Look out for New Generation Koumi Fans taking ova in this bitch... TaiJun and Taichi/Oc Needs more Hits...