for Naruto: What If7/10 c1 theeelderman5
ahaahhahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahah what the FUUUUUUCK ahahahahahahahah twice I'm going to wake my roomate from this hahahahahhaahahahah
ahaahhahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahah what the FUUUUUUCK ahahahahahahahah twice I'm going to wake my roomate from this hahahahahhaahahahah
4/21 c55 Guest
SOMELNE STAB DANZO.
SOMELNE STAB DANZO.
9/18/2022 c26 SkyNeves
Yep... I'm done. Sorry the manipulation and "forced love" didn't work for me. It'd be easier for him to get hurt after this and then move on to someone his age or even another Jonin from the leaf.
Yep... I'm done. Sorry the manipulation and "forced love" didn't work for me. It'd be easier for him to get hurt after this and then move on to someone his age or even another Jonin from the leaf.
6/17/2022 c74 Guest
Wow, Anko isna piece of shit I can't believe you actually plot forced them together, you should have just killed the cheating whore
Wow, Anko isna piece of shit I can't believe you actually plot forced them together, you should have just killed the cheating whore
6/17/2022 c74 Guest
This entire chapter was pointless disgusting crap, all you've done is shown just how shitty a person Anko is and I hope she dies
This entire chapter was pointless disgusting crap, all you've done is shown just how shitty a person Anko is and I hope she dies
6/9/2022 c39 Alrissa
... Didn't Kabuto get taken out by an anbu squad just before chuunin exams explicitly because Sasuke outed him.
... Didn't Kabuto get taken out by an anbu squad just before chuunin exams explicitly because Sasuke outed him.
6/6/2022 c10 
1jaybay23911
Your giving info way to easily and the fact that the support characters go along with the charade make it boring. Why are you making him a mary sue ?
1jaybay23911Your giving info way to easily and the fact that the support characters go along with the charade make it boring. Why are you making him a mary sue ?
6/5/2022 c8 jay.mcgrathvolau
Your being way to liberal with your information, pulling info out of your ass and giving it freely doesn't do any good for the story, it make it boring. Plus, your making him to perfect, you need to put some kinks on his plot armor or this is going to get real boring fast. If the comedy wasn't any good I would've dropped this.
Your being way to liberal with your information, pulling info out of your ass and giving it freely doesn't do any good for the story, it make it boring. Plus, your making him to perfect, you need to put some kinks on his plot armor or this is going to get real boring fast. If the comedy wasn't any good I would've dropped this.