Reviews: Naruto: What If

6/14 c74 Cthul
Good for the first 3/4 then it’s just got unnecessarily angsty. Should have kept it the same tone as it started out. It was much more entertaining and didn’t set me off since it mirrored what happened with my bitch ex.

6/13 c19 Cthul
I don’t know why, but I fucking cracked up on the part about the info being written with a pencil in English. My humour is absolutely fucked…

7/10/2023 c15 theeelderman
anko ugly since the start of the show annoying ass fuck

7/10/2023 c15 theeelderman
ew had to. make the mc love the dumb ugly bitch anko

7/10/2023 c2 theeelderman
IV lost all composure to bad you left the site

7/10/2023 c2 theeelderman
yes

7/10/2023 c1 theeelderman
ahaahhahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahah what the FUUUUUUCK ahahahahahahahah twice I'm going to wake my roomate from this hahahahahhaahahahah

4/21/2023 c55 Guest
SOMELNE STAB DANZO.

10/17/2022 c4 TheShami
4 chapters in and I'm pretty sure the author is writing with his dick
I'm out

9/18/2022 c26 SkyNeves
Yep... I'm done. Sorry the manipulation and "forced love" didn't work for me. It'd be easier for him to get hurt after this and then move on to someone his age or even another Jonin from the leaf.

9/5/2022 c1

1Monsieur Mastermind
The hell is MSG?

6/17/2022 c74 Guest
Wow, Anko isna piece of shit I can't believe you actually plot forced them together, you should have just killed the cheating whore

6/17/2022 c74 Guest
This entire chapter was pointless disgusting crap, all you've done is shown just how shitty a person Anko is and I hope she dies

6/9/2022 c64

4Alrissa
After the time skip this reads like bad fanfiction of "Naruto what if"

6/9/2022 c39 Alrissa
... Didn't Kabuto get taken out by an anbu squad just before chuunin exams explicitly because Sasuke outed him.

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