for The Elven Bloodline6/4/2015 c1 sam stewart
great story hope to read more soon.
great story hope to read more soon.
1/17/2015 c1 
19Smiling Seshat
You have trouble seeing the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. They are not the same word, so it's important to be careful with that.
Is this on hiatus?
19Smiling SeshatYou have trouble seeing the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. They are not the same word, so it's important to be careful with that.
Is this on hiatus?
9/11/2014 c1 Dracoessa
Damn good start, and for whom naruto should be with, maybe hinata?
Damn good start, and for whom naruto should be with, maybe hinata?
10/6/2013 c1 Dracoessa
Damn good start, and I'm looking forward to see emo-uke-teme, pink howler monkey banshee, the emo ass kissing council (aka civilian council), and the old codger council (aka elder council).
Damn good start, and I'm looking forward to see emo-uke-teme, pink howler monkey banshee, the emo ass kissing council (aka civilian council), and the old codger council (aka elder council).
9/14/2013 c1 45Hikari Nova
many typoes and...very ooc in terms of saratobi when it comes to the kyuubi over all not a bad idea
45Hikari Novamany typoes and...very ooc in terms of saratobi when it comes to the kyuubi over all not a bad idea
2/28/2013 c1 1copycat kakashi
please up date this story even if it is only a few chapters so I can see what you want done with it to continue it
1copycat kakashiplease up date this story even if it is only a few chapters so I can see what you want done with it to continue it
1/22/2013 c1 phil12130
nice story so far was this in any way inspired by the inheritence cycle
nice story so far was this in any way inspired by the inheritence cycle
12/19/2012 c1 jack
Love to see were this story goes so update soon.
Love to see were this story goes so update soon.