for Before Dawn1/3/2020 c1 Elanor12345
Are you really not going to write another chapter? I am in desperate need of it... :'D
Are you really not going to write another chapter? I am in desperate need of it... :'D
11/27/2017 c1 Guest
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6/25/2017 c1 Blargd
4 years later
4 years later
2/28/2015 c1 Guest
It was amazing! I love the pairing of charlie and patrick, I tried looking for other stories with this pairing but theres like none! But even in the very few I find there not that great X( please continue!3
It was amazing! I love the pairing of charlie and patrick, I tried looking for other stories with this pairing but theres like none! But even in the very few I find there not that great X( please continue!3
2/10/2015 c1 
15dei-deifangirl13
I wanted to say that I just finished reading this. I read it in like ten minutes. It truly amazing. I would love for there to be another chapter. And also, I loved the idea of this pairing from the single kiss they shared in the movie. I really think your ending is good. Because it is very realistic. I like that Charlie questions things, because that is how his character really is. So the ending is great. Thank you for writing it and for also sharing it with the world. I'm sure other people love it just as much as I did. Have you ever considered, or do you, write stories of your own? I think you'd be a great author.- and P.S. sorry if that is a bit of a personal question. I was just curious.
15dei-deifangirl13I wanted to say that I just finished reading this. I read it in like ten minutes. It truly amazing. I would love for there to be another chapter. And also, I loved the idea of this pairing from the single kiss they shared in the movie. I really think your ending is good. Because it is very realistic. I like that Charlie questions things, because that is how his character really is. So the ending is great. Thank you for writing it and for also sharing it with the world. I'm sure other people love it just as much as I did. Have you ever considered, or do you, write stories of your own? I think you'd be a great author.- and P.S. sorry if that is a bit of a personal question. I was just curious.
3/22/2014 c1 AngelBlades
I love this
I love this
1/7/2014 c1 Guest
You really need to keep on going this amazing please don't stop now this is a really good story one if the best I've read
You really need to keep on going this amazing please don't stop now this is a really good story one if the best I've read
11/3/2013 c1 7UnicornMister
Wow. That left me speechless... Just so you know, that was incredibly hot. Like, damn, I need to go change my undies now. Real life does make finding time to write difficult, but I will be waiting for your update whenever it gets the chance to surface. :)
7UnicornMisterWow. That left me speechless... Just so you know, that was incredibly hot. Like, damn, I need to go change my undies now. Real life does make finding time to write difficult, but I will be waiting for your update whenever it gets the chance to surface. :)
8/13/2013 c1 Guest
I understand people get busy and life happens, but are you ever going to finish it? I mean no disrespect, but it irritates me when people begin stories and then do not complete them; it is so rude not to finish the story.
I understand people get busy and life happens, but are you ever going to finish it? I mean no disrespect, but it irritates me when people begin stories and then do not complete them; it is so rude not to finish the story.
8/2/2013 c1 3SmoothAssassin
Please write another chapter! The awkwardness of Charlie made this story not ooc. Also, the fact that Patrick was depressed made his personality malleable. I can't wait to see what happens next.
3SmoothAssassinPlease write another chapter! The awkwardness of Charlie made this story not ooc. Also, the fact that Patrick was depressed made his personality malleable. I can't wait to see what happens next.
7/12/2013 c1 Guest
Love this story ! ;3
Love this story ! ;3
6/8/2013 c1 Em
This was epic. I actually thought it was pretty in character, though I've only seen the movie. This was so hot and great. I do hope you continue.
This was epic. I actually thought it was pretty in character, though I've only seen the movie. This was so hot and great. I do hope you continue.