for Bring Me to Life11/19/2013 c1 SickPuppy
/playfulness with Renji's tough guy exterior, looking forward to the next chapter (a note never try to review on an iPhone at work, it results in accidental posting of reviews!)
/playfulness with Renji's tough guy exterior, looking forward to the next chapter (a note never try to review on an iPhone at work, it results in accidental posting of reviews!)
11/19/2013 c1 SickPuppy
First off well done on the story, it has definitely captured my interest. Maybe you could make the chapters a bit longer say about 1000? I've noticed that the stories with the most reviews tend to have 1000 words per chapter, the pairing is an interesting one I must say there definitely needs to be more love for this couple especially since a large part of bleach fanfiction writers seem to pair Ichigo and Rukia together leaving poor Renji off on the side lines, I think it will be an interesting and fun dynamic between the two what with Rangiku's flirtyness
First off well done on the story, it has definitely captured my interest. Maybe you could make the chapters a bit longer say about 1000? I've noticed that the stories with the most reviews tend to have 1000 words per chapter, the pairing is an interesting one I must say there definitely needs to be more love for this couple especially since a large part of bleach fanfiction writers seem to pair Ichigo and Rukia together leaving poor Renji off on the side lines, I think it will be an interesting and fun dynamic between the two what with Rangiku's flirtyness
12/17/2012 c1 
2Stewards4yoohoo
I'm curious as to see who hurt her. O_o Few people manage to actually hurt Rangiku...
2Stewards4yoohooI'm curious as to see who hurt her. O_o Few people manage to actually hurt Rangiku...