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11/4/2015 c1 HimuraAmi
I loved this! Your style of writing is so captivating. I've read almost all your JoshNeku fics & I just HAD to fav them! Please continue writing like this~
2/11/2013 c1 mybirdisknockedover
I really love your characterizations of Joshua and Neku! ;w; I loved the idea of the soul pool - very creative!
1/7/2013 c1 1HellsingDog
That was really sweet of Neku. Aww. Joshua, hug him back. You know you want to.
12/30/2012 c1 12TheApathyImp
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i can't

this pairing

my soul

it hurts

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12/19/2012 c1 2arhangle
awww that was absolutely sweet!keep writing and producing these things will ya?
12/17/2012 c1 WordRover
Wow... This is great!
12/17/2012 c1 3JudgmentOfTheDream
I love how EVERYONE thinks that Josh commited suicide and that he had a crappy life.

But then again, wouldn't it be creepy if Joshua really was how he was presented in TWEWY? Sarcastic, all-knowing, creepy bastard, with no remorse? To the core? ... *shivers*

Anyway, to get away from that, let's start with the actual review:
I really liked your fanfic and how you presented the difference between the dead and the living. "The problem with the living, for starters, was their unbounded fascination with the Unknown. And being able to see a film-reel of anyone's life upon a whim was definitely under the list of the Desirable Unknown." That one's my absolute favourite. Best part in the whole story, because it's so TRUE.

You presented Neku and Joshua so well. The story was really well written. I also like the way you wrote the connection between Josh and Shibuya, how the City itself even trembled when he was angry.

To press it into one sentence: This fanfic was great and it deserves a place in my favourites!

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